From 0283a40b3799f8142b82b5e2df982848b53c0017 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dru Lavigne Date: Thu, 3 Apr 2014 12:58:12 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Minor wordsmithing suggested by bjk and wblock. Submitted by: bjk, wblock Sponsored by: iXsystems --- .../books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml | 36 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml index 1a575916b3..b532a7742a 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml @@ -1543,25 +1543,25 @@ The deinstallation will free 229 kB Poudriere is a BSD-licensed utility for creating and testing &os; packages. It uses &os; jails to set up isolated - compilation environments which can be used to build packages for - versions of &os; that are different from the box on which it is + compilation environments. These jails can be used to build packages for + versions of &os; that are different from the system on which it is installed, and also to build packages for i386 if the host is an - &arch.amd64; system. Once the packages are built, they will be - in a layout identical to the official mirrors and are therefore - usable by &man.pkg.8; and other package management + &arch.amd64; system. Once the packages are built, they are + in a layout identical to the official mirrors. These packages + are usable by &man.pkg.8; and other package management tools. - Poudriere can be installed using + Poudriere is installed using the ports-mgmt/poudriere package - or port. The installation will include a sample configuration + or port. The installation includes a sample configuration file /usr/local/etc/poudriere.conf.sample. - This file should be copied to - /usr/local/etc/poudriere.conf which can - then be edited to suit the local configuration. + Copy this file to + /usr/local/etc/poudriere.conf. Edit the + copied file to suit the local configuration. While ZFS is not required on the system running poudriere, it is beneficial. - When ZFS is used, the + When ZFS is used, ZPOOL must be specified in /usr/local/etc/poudriere.conf and FREEBSD_HOST should be set to a nearby @@ -1583,14 +1583,14 @@ The deinstallation will free 229 kB Initialize Jails and Port Trees - Once configured, initialize + After configuration, initialize poudriere so that it installs a jail with the required &os; tree and a ports tree. Specify a name for the jail using and the &os; version with . On systems running &os;/&arch.amd64;, the architecture can be set with to either i386 or - amd64. The default is to use the + amd64. The default is the architecture shown by uname. &prompt.root; poudriere jail -c -j 10amd64 -v 10.0-RELEASE @@ -1666,13 +1666,13 @@ devel/git ports-mgmt/pkg ... - To configure the options and dependencies for the - specified ports: + Options and dependencies for the specified ports are + configured:: &prompt.root; poudriere options -j 10amd64 -p local -z workstation -f workstation-pkglist - Finally, to build the packages and create the package - repository: + Finally, packages are built and a package + repository is created: &prompt.root; poudriere bulk -j 10amd64 -p local -z workstation -f workstation-pkglist @@ -1684,7 +1684,7 @@ ports-mgmt/pkg that can be used with a web server to display build information. - Once the build is complete, packages are now available for + Packages are now available for installation from the poudriere repository.