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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml
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<!--
The FreeBSD Documentation Project
$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml,v 1.27 2000/04/06 20:28:35 jim Exp $
$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml,v 1.28 2000/06/08 01:56:09 jim Exp $
-->
<chapter id="introduction">
@ -113,9 +113,9 @@
<listitem>
<para>Strong <emphasis>TCP/IP networking</emphasis> with
support for industry standards such as SLIP, PPP, NFS, DHCP
and NIS support. This means that your FreeBSD machine can
inter-operate easily with other systems as well act as an
support for industry standards such as SLIP, PPP, NFS, DHCP,
and NIS. This means that your FreeBSD machine can
inter-operate easily with other systems as well as act as an
enterprise server, providing vital functions such as NFS
(remote file access) and e-mail services or putting your
organization on the Internet with WWW, FTP, routing and
@ -186,7 +186,7 @@
<listitem>
<para><emphasis>Source code</emphasis> for the entire system
means you have the greatest degree of control over your
environment. Why be locked into a proprietary solution and
environment. Why be locked into a proprietary solution
at the mercy of your vendor when you can have a truly Open
System?</para>
</listitem>
@ -499,7 +499,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>The central source tree for FreeBSD is maintained by
<ulink url="http://www.cyclic.com/cyclic-pages/CVS-sheet.html">CVS</ulink>
<ulink url="http://www.cyclic.com/CVS/index_html">CVS</ulink>
(Concurrent Version System), a freely available source code
control tool that comes bundled with FreeBSD. The primary
<ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi">CVS
@ -628,7 +628,7 @@
and server support, transaction TCP support, dial-on-demand PPP,
integrated DHCP support, an improved SCSI subsystem, ISDN support,
support for ATM, FDDI, Fast and Gigabit Ethernet (1000Mbit)
adapters, improved support for the latest Adaptec controllers and
adapters, improved support for the latest Adaptec controllers, and
many hundreds of bug fixes.</para>
<para>We have also taken the comments and suggestions of many of our
@ -637,10 +637,10 @@
this (constantly evolving) process is especially welcome!</para>
<para>In addition to the base distributions, FreeBSD offers a
ported software collection with hundreds of commonly sought-after
ported software collection with thousands of commonly sought-after
programs. By mid-January 2000, there were nearly 3000 ports! The
list of ports ranges from http (WWW) servers, to games, languages,
editors and almost everything in between. The entire ports
editors, and almost everything in between. The entire ports
collection requires approximately 50MB of storage, all ports being
expressed as <quote>deltas</quote> to their original sources. This
makes it much easier for us to update ports, and greatly reduces
@ -682,7 +682,7 @@
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
<para>You can also visit the master (and most frequently updated)
<para>You can also view the master (and most frequently updated)
copies at <ulink
url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/">http://www.FreeBSD.org/</ulink>.</para>
@ -699,8 +699,8 @@
no requirement for copying encrypted passwords from different hosts
(Suns, DEC machines, etc) into FreeBSD password entries, then
FreeBSD's MD5 based security may be all you require! We feel that
our default security model is more than a match for DES, and without
any messy export issues to deal with. If you are outside (or even
our default security model is more than a match for DES, and avoids
dealing with any messy export issues. If you are outside (or even
inside) the U.S., give it a try!</para>
</sect2>
</sect1>

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en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml
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<!--
The FreeBSD Documentation Project
$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml,v 1.27 2000/04/06 20:28:35 jim Exp $
$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml,v 1.28 2000/06/08 01:56:09 jim Exp $
-->
<chapter id="introduction">
@ -113,9 +113,9 @@
<listitem>
<para>Strong <emphasis>TCP/IP networking</emphasis> with
support for industry standards such as SLIP, PPP, NFS, DHCP
and NIS support. This means that your FreeBSD machine can
inter-operate easily with other systems as well act as an
support for industry standards such as SLIP, PPP, NFS, DHCP,
and NIS. This means that your FreeBSD machine can
inter-operate easily with other systems as well as act as an
enterprise server, providing vital functions such as NFS
(remote file access) and e-mail services or putting your
organization on the Internet with WWW, FTP, routing and
@ -186,7 +186,7 @@
<listitem>
<para><emphasis>Source code</emphasis> for the entire system
means you have the greatest degree of control over your
environment. Why be locked into a proprietary solution and
environment. Why be locked into a proprietary solution
at the mercy of your vendor when you can have a truly Open
System?</para>
</listitem>
@ -499,7 +499,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>The central source tree for FreeBSD is maintained by
<ulink url="http://www.cyclic.com/cyclic-pages/CVS-sheet.html">CVS</ulink>
<ulink url="http://www.cyclic.com/CVS/index_html">CVS</ulink>
(Concurrent Version System), a freely available source code
control tool that comes bundled with FreeBSD. The primary
<ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi">CVS
@ -628,7 +628,7 @@
and server support, transaction TCP support, dial-on-demand PPP,
integrated DHCP support, an improved SCSI subsystem, ISDN support,
support for ATM, FDDI, Fast and Gigabit Ethernet (1000Mbit)
adapters, improved support for the latest Adaptec controllers and
adapters, improved support for the latest Adaptec controllers, and
many hundreds of bug fixes.</para>
<para>We have also taken the comments and suggestions of many of our
@ -637,10 +637,10 @@
this (constantly evolving) process is especially welcome!</para>
<para>In addition to the base distributions, FreeBSD offers a
ported software collection with hundreds of commonly sought-after
ported software collection with thousands of commonly sought-after
programs. By mid-January 2000, there were nearly 3000 ports! The
list of ports ranges from http (WWW) servers, to games, languages,
editors and almost everything in between. The entire ports
editors, and almost everything in between. The entire ports
collection requires approximately 50MB of storage, all ports being
expressed as <quote>deltas</quote> to their original sources. This
makes it much easier for us to update ports, and greatly reduces
@ -682,7 +682,7 @@
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
<para>You can also visit the master (and most frequently updated)
<para>You can also view the master (and most frequently updated)
copies at <ulink
url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/">http://www.FreeBSD.org/</ulink>.</para>
@ -699,8 +699,8 @@
no requirement for copying encrypted passwords from different hosts
(Suns, DEC machines, etc) into FreeBSD password entries, then
FreeBSD's MD5 based security may be all you require! We feel that
our default security model is more than a match for DES, and without
any messy export issues to deal with. If you are outside (or even
our default security model is more than a match for DES, and avoids
dealing with any messy export issues. If you are outside (or even
inside) the U.S., give it a try!</para>
</sect2>
</sect1>