diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml index 177776fa62..7e84eb217a 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml @@ -7654,7 +7654,7 @@ round-trip min/avg/max/stddev = 2.530/2.643/2.774/0.103 ms therefore each such substring can be abbreviated by ::. For example fe80::1 corresponds to the canonical form - fe80:0000:0000:0000:0000:0000:0000:0001 + fe80:0000:0000:0000:0000:0000:0000:0001. A third form is to write the last 32 Bit part in the well known (decimal) IPv4 style with dots . @@ -7663,7 +7663,7 @@ round-trip min/avg/max/stddev = 2.530/2.643/2.774/0.103 ms corresponds to the (hexadecimal) canonical representation 2002:0000:0000:0000:0000:0000:0a00:0001 which in turn is equivalent to - writing 2002::a00:1 + writing 2002::a00:1. By now the reader should be able to understand the following: @@ -7704,14 +7704,14 @@ round-trip min/avg/max/stddev = 2.530/2.643/2.774/0.103 ms - Use the freenet6 port if you are on a dial-up connection. + Use the net/freenet6 port if you are on a dial-up connection. Here we will talk on how to connect to the 6bone since it currently seems to be the most popular way. - First take a look at the 6bone site and find a 6bone connection nearest to + First take a look at the 6bone site and find a 6bone connection nearest to you. Write to the responsible person and with a little bit of luck you will be given instructions on how to set up your connection. Usually this involves setting up a GRE (gif) tunnel. @@ -7733,7 +7733,7 @@ gif0: flags=8010<POINTOPOINT,MULTICAST> mtu 1280 In case you are intrigued by the address ff02:1%gif0, this is a multicast address. %gif0 states that the multicast address at network interface gif0 is to be used. Since we ping a multicast address the - other endpoint of the tunnel should reply as well). + other endpoint of the tunnel should reply as well. By now setting up a route to your 6bone uplink should be rather straightforward: