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-&vendorintroduction;
-
- Please note that the inclusion of vendors in our list
- does not signify our endorsement of their products or services.
+ The power, flexibility, and reliability of FreeBSD
+ attract a wide variety of users and vendors.
+ In addition to our gallery page,
+ showcasing many of our users,
+ below is a list of vendors offering commercial products, services,
+ and/or consulting for FreeBSD.
-- Software Vendors
- From audio players and network drivers to commercial databases,
- you will find a variety of industrial strength software for FreeBSD.
- You can see the alphabetical list,
- or, if you prefer,
- view it by categories.
+
- Consulting Services
+ Whether you are just starting out with FreeBSD, or need to complete
+ a large project, hiring consultants might be your answer. You can
+ see the alphabetical list, or, if you
+ prefer, view it by categories.
- Hardware Vendors
- Need specialized tools or just browsing for equipment?
+ Need specialized tools, looking to buy a new desktop, or to fill a
+ cage with rack mount servers that come with FreeBSD pre-installed?
These companies may have what you need!
-- Consulting Services
- Whether you are just starting out with FreeBSD,
- or need to complete a large project,
- a consultant or two might be your answer.
- You can see the alphabetical list,
- or, if you prefer,
- view it by categories.
-
-
- Miscellaneous Vendors
Books and accessories you just cannot live without!
+- Software Vendors
+ From audio players, network drivers, to commercial databases,
+ FreeBSD has a wide variety of industrial strength software
+ available. You can see the alphabetical list, or, if you prefer, view
+ it by categories.
+
+
+
+ If your company supports a FreeBSD related product, service,
+ consulting, or support that should be added to this page, please
+ send email to www@FreeBSD.org
+ and let us know! Submissions should be in HTML and a medium-sized
+ paragraph in length. Please note that the inclusion of vendors in
+ our list does not signify our endorsement of their products or
+ services by the FreeBSD Project.
+
+
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