From 079680308dd9076f07bb33b4b33eecf3aea3ccf7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Tue, 6 Apr 2004 18:10:39 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Minor grammatical cleanup.

Requested by:	phantom
---
 .../articles/freebsd-questions/article.sgml   | 26 +++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.sgml
index b8cc756cfa..7b5bcf9bf1 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.sgml
@@ -88,22 +88,22 @@
 
     <para>FreeBSD-questions is a mailing list, so you need mail access.  Point
       your WWW browser to <ulink url="">FreeBSD-question Info Page</ulink>.
-      In section titled <quote>Subscribing to freebsd-questions</quote> fill
-      <quote>Your email address</quote> field, and optionally other fields.
+      In the section titled <quote>Subscribing to freebsd-questions</quote> fill
+      in the <quote>Your email address</quote> field; the other fields are optional.
     </para>
 
     <note>
-      <para>The password fields in subscription form provides only mild
+      <para>The password fields in the subscription form provide only mild
         security, but should prevent others from messing with your
         subscription.  <emphasis>Do not use a valuable password</emphasis> as
         it will occasionally be emailed back to you in cleartext.</para>
     </note>
 
-    <para>When you get confirmation message from
-      <application>mailman</application> follow included instructions
-      to complete subscription.</para>
+    <para>You will receive a confirmation message from
+      <application>mailman</application>; follow the included instructions
+      to complete your subscription.</para>
 
-    <para>And finally when you get the <quote>Welcome</quote> message from
+    <para>Finally, when you get the <quote>Welcome</quote> message from
       <application>mailman</application> telling you the details of the list
       and subscription area password, <emphasis>please save it</emphasis>.
       If you ever should want to leave the list, you will need the information
@@ -152,18 +152,18 @@ prefer.  This reminder will also include instructions on how to
 unsubscribe or change your account options.  There is also a button on
 your options page that will email your current password to you.</literallayout>
 
-    <para>Using URL specified in your <quote>Welcome</quote> message you
-      may visit <quote>Account management page</quote> and request
+    <para>From the URL specified in your <quote>Welcome</quote> message you
+      may visit the <quote>Account management page</quote> and enter a request
       to <quote>Unsubscribe</quote> you from FreeBSD-questions mailing
       list.</para>
 
-    <para>When you get confirmation message from
-      <application>mailman</application> follow included instructions
-      to finish unscubscribing.</para>
+    <para>A confirmation message will be sent to you from
+      <application>mailman</application>; follow the included instructions
+      to finish unsubscribing.</para>
 
     <para>If you have done this, and you still can not figure out what
       is going on, send a message to
-      <email>freebsd-questions-request@FreeBSD.org</email>, and he will
+      <email>freebsd-questions-request@FreeBSD.org</email>, and they will
       sort things out for you.  <emphasis>Do not</emphasis> send a message to
       FreeBSD-questions: they can not help you.</para>
   </sect1>