diff --git a/en/docs.sgml b/en/docs.sgml index f1952148ec..e6297241e6 100644 --- a/en/docs.sgml +++ b/en/docs.sgml @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ + %includes; ]> - + &header; @@ -32,13 +32,13 @@
The press about FreeBSD.
+Articles in the press about FreeBSD.
This is the FreeBSD project's current statement about its Year 2000 +
The FreeBSD project's current statement about its Year 2000 compatibility.
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@A monthly (sometimes bi-weekly) newsletter containing recent +
A monthly (sometimes bi-weekly) newsletter announcing recent developments in the FreeBSD arena. Subscribe to freebsd-announce to receive this newsletter via e-mail.
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@This is an evolving, comprehensive on-line resource for FreeBSD users. +
An evolving, comprehensive on-line resource for FreeBSD users. Please address comments and contributions to <freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG>.
@@ -72,9 +72,8 @@If you have a question, chances are that someone else has the same - question. The most common of these have been compiled here in a brief - question-answer format.
+If you have a question, chances are that someone else has had it too. + The most common of these questions (and answers) have been compiled here.
&i.new; We now offer a Russian translation and a Chinese translation of the FAQ.
@@ -86,7 +85,7 @@Here lie assorted documents on various aspects of FreeBSD, FreeBSD +
Assorted documents about various aspects of FreeBSD, FreeBSD software, and hardware. If you have comments or would like to contribute a document, please contact us at freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org.
@@ -95,9 +94,9 @@www.FreeBSD.org is not the only place to get information on FreeBSD and - various independent efforts have also produced a great deal of useful - information on FreeBSD:
+www.FreeBSD.org is not the only place to get information on FreeBSD; + various independent efforts have also produced a great deal of useful + information about FreeBSD.
Kirk McKusick, one @@ -139,7 +138,7 @@
The - Linux+FreeBSD mini-HOWTO - this document describes how to use + Linux+FreeBSD mini-HOWTO describes how to use Linux and FreeBSD on the same system. It introduces FreeBSD and discusses how the two operating systems can cooperate, e.g. by sharing swap space.
@@ -221,33 +220,27 @@ -->This service is provided courtesy of Wolfram Schneider. There - is another - script available with the manual pages for FreeBSD 2.0 and XFree86 - release 3.1, courtesy of Hinrich - Eilts.
+ href="http://wolfram.schneider.org/">Wolfram Schneider.If you like reading BSD manuals online, here is a hypertext version of +
If you like to read BSD manuals online, here is a hypertext version of the 4.4BSD documents from /usr/share/doc, where you would find - the documents on a FreeBSD machine (if the doc distribution was - installed).
+ href="file:/usr/share/doc">/usr/share/doc, where you will find + the documents on a FreeBSD machine (if you install the doc distribution). +If you like reading FreeBSD Info documents online, here is a hypertext +
If you like to read FreeBSD Info documents online, here is a hypertext version of the Info documents from /usr/share/info, where you would find - the Info documents on a FreeBSD machine (if the info distribution was - installed).
+ href="file:/usr/share/info">/usr/share/info, where you will find + the Info documents on a FreeBSD machine (if you install the info + distribution). @@ -270,7 +263,7 @@The FreeBSD 'zine is a monthly collection of easy to read (we hope) +
A monthly collection of easy to read (we hope) articles written by FreeBSD users and administrators just like you.
Like FreeBSD itself, this documentation is the product of a volunteer