diff --git a/en/docs.sgml b/en/docs.sgml index f1952148ec..e6297241e6 100644 --- a/en/docs.sgml +++ b/en/docs.sgml @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ + %includes; ]> - + &header; @@ -32,13 +32,13 @@

FreeBSD in the Press

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The press about FreeBSD.

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Articles in the press about FreeBSD.

Year 2000 Compatibility

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This is the FreeBSD project's current statement about its Year 2000 +

The FreeBSD project's current statement about its Year 2000 compatibility.

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FreeBSD Real-Quick (TM) Newsletter (RQN)

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A monthly (sometimes bi-weekly) newsletter containing recent +

A monthly (sometimes bi-weekly) newsletter announcing recent developments in the FreeBSD arena. Subscribe to freebsd-announce to receive this newsletter via e-mail.

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The FreeBSD Handbook

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This is an evolving, comprehensive on-line resource for FreeBSD users. +

An evolving, comprehensive on-line resource for FreeBSD users. Please address comments and contributions to <freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG>.

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Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)

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If you have a question, chances are that someone else has the same - question. The most common of these have been compiled here in a brief - question-answer format.

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If you have a question, chances are that someone else has had it too. + The most common of these questions (and answers) have been compiled here.

&i.new; We now offer a Russian translation and a Chinese translation of the FAQ.

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Tutorials

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Here lie assorted documents on various aspects of FreeBSD, FreeBSD +

Assorted documents about various aspects of FreeBSD, FreeBSD software, and hardware. If you have comments or would like to contribute a document, please contact us at freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org.

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Additional Resources

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www.FreeBSD.org is not the only place to get information on FreeBSD and - various independent efforts have also produced a great deal of useful - information on FreeBSD:

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www.FreeBSD.org is not the only place to get information on FreeBSD; + various independent efforts have also produced a great deal of useful + information about FreeBSD.