From 1071a3a6f11397c8bfa6123e4f0857b7185981ee Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Adam Weinberger <adamw@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sat, 12 Mar 2005 22:38:57 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Spelling, grammar, and readability. Oh my!

---
 en/gnome/docs/faq210.sgml | 38 ++++++++++++++++++++------------------
 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en/gnome/docs/faq210.sgml b/en/gnome/docs/faq210.sgml
index c83a81270c..95888bb585 100644
--- a/en/gnome/docs/faq210.sgml
+++ b/en/gnome/docs/faq210.sgml
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
 	  management, wireless single strength monitoring for all
 	  supported drivers, and disk read/write utilization
 	<li>Better keyboard layout and feature control
-	<li>Sleek desktop background selector
+	<li>Sleek selection of desktop backgrounds
 	<li>Many new applications, applets, and UI enhancements
 	<li>Extensive list of stability and speed increases
       </ul>
@@ -142,31 +142,33 @@ $ tail -f /path/to/logfile
 		within FreeBSD.  Some of the more visible issues are:</p>
 
 		<ul>
-	  <li>Change the theme cause few apps crash. It is known issue to the
-            GNOME/Linux world, so it is not FreeBSD issue. You can ignore and
-            click on restart button when the dialog pops up. After that, you
-            will be fine.
-	  <li>KDE menu doesn't show all icons. It is because of GNOME and KDE
-            have the very different theme. KDE has failed to follow the
-            freedesktop.org standard for when theme doesn't exist and the
-            fall back should be go to hicolor theme. KDE has all default theme
-            in default.kde rather than hicolor. There is not much we can do.
+	  <li>Changing the GTK theme can cause a few apps to crash. This issue is known  to the
+            GNOME/Linux world, so it is not a FreeBSD-specific issue. You can ignore
+			the error message, and click the "Restart" button to restart the
+			crashed application when the dialog pops up. You should be fine after that.
+	  <li>The KDE menu is missing some icons. KDE failed to follow the published
+	        freedesktop.org standards, and places its icons in a non-standard
+			location. GNOME 2.10 introduced a mass move towards complete compliance
+			with freedesktop.org standards, so there's not much that can be done
+			until KDE moves its default icons into a location that GNOME recognizes.
 
             <a href="http://standards.freedesktop.org/icon-theme-spec/icon-theme-spec-latest.html">http://standards.freedesktop.org/icon-theme-spec/icon-theme-spec-latest.html</a>
           <li><a href="http://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=167934">
-            #167934</a>: [gnome-menus] Any .desktop file that go in
-            share/gnome/apps without have Categories entry don't work. It is
-            LegacyDir bug that is supposed to be fix in next release (2.10.1).
-            The workaround is to add Categories entry in .desktop file.
+            #167934</a>: [gnome-menus] Any .desktop file in
+            share/gnome/apps without a Categories entry will not work. This is due
+			to a 
+            LegacyDir bug that is supposed to be fixed in next release (2.10.1).
+            The workaround is to add a Categories entry in the .desktop file in
+			question.
 	  <li>[gnome-session]: Options for shutting down or rebooting
 	    will not appear on logout unless GDM is running on the
 	    same machine.
           <li><a href="http://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=137388">
             #137388</a>: [gnome-terminal] gnome-terminal has a problem
-            with the dynamic title and vim (<b>UPDATE:</b> See this
+            with dynamic titles and vim (<b>UPDATE:</b> See this
 	    <a
 	    href="http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-gnome/2004-May/006689.html">email</a>
-	    for a workaround to this problem)</li>
+	    for a workaround to this problem)
 	  <li><a
 	    href="http://bugzilla.ximian.com/show_bug.cgi?id=73375">#73375</a>:
 	    [evolution] Evolution will crash when selecting a new
@@ -193,8 +195,8 @@ $ tail -f /path/to/logfile
 
 <!-- Q7 -->
       <li style="padding-bottom: 0.5em"><a name="q7"></a>
-      <p><b>I want the fame and glory of the FreeBSD GNOME team!  What can I
-        do to participate?</b></p>
+      <p><b>I want the fame and glory of being part of the FreeBSD GNOME team!
+	    What can I do to participate?</b></p>
 <!-- A7 -->
       <p>Please read our list of <a href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/gnome/docs/volunteer.html">ways
         to get involved</a>!