From 13be28aa3474ecfb4a4d686492f9abb82767eb13 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Mon, 16 Oct 2006 11:59:08 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Fix various minor wording nits, use <quote> for quoting, use
 &os.numports; instead of a hardcoded Ports number, and note that `Alpha' is a
 supported architecture up to version 6.X of FreeBSD.

---
 .../articles/building-products/article.sgml          | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/building-products/article.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/building-products/article.sgml
index 73f00fd872..aae16c1676 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/building-products/article.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/building-products/article.sgml
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
       <title>Abstract</title>
 
       <para>The FreeBSD project is a worldwide, voluntary, and
-        collaborative project developing a portable and high-quality
+        collaborative project, which develops a portable and high-quality
         operating system.  The FreeBSD project distributes the source
         code for its product under a liberal license, with the
         intention of encouraging the use of its code.  Collaborating
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@
       <listitem>
         <simpara>FreeBSD source code is distributed under a liberal
           BSD license facilitating its adoption in commercial products
-          <citation>Mon2005</citation> with the minimum of hassle.</simpara>
+          <citation>Mon2005</citation> with minimum hassle.</simpara>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <simpara>The FreeBSD project has excellent engineering
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@
         <listitem>
           <simpara>As a Unix compatible environment for the management
             functions of high-end storage and networking devices,
-            running on a separate processor 'blade'.</simpara>
+            running on a separate processor <quote>blade</quote>.</simpara>
           <simpara>FreeBSD provides the tools for creating dedicated
             OS and application program images.  Its implementation of
             a BSD unix API is mature and tested.  FreeBSD can also
@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@
               url="http://www.rtems.com/">RTEMS</ulink> and <ulink
               url="http://ecos.sourceware.org/">eCOS</ulink>.</simpara>
           <simpara>There are many full-fledged development environments
-            in the 13,000-strong collection of applications ported and
+            in the &os.numports;-strong collection of applications ported and
             packaged with FreeBSD.</simpara>
         </listitem>
 
@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <simpara>A complete system that can cross-host itself for
-            the following architectures: alpha, amd64, ia64, i386,
+            the following architectures: alpha (up to &os; version 6.X), amd64, ia64, i386,
             sparc64, powerpc (see &man.build.7;).</simpara>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
@@ -351,7 +351,7 @@
             composed in flexible ways.</simpara>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <simpara>Over 13,000 ported applications, both commercial
+          <simpara>Over &os.numports; ported applications, both commercial
             and open-source, managed via the FreeBSD ports
             collection.</simpara>
         </listitem>