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<!DOCTYPE article PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD DocBook XML V5.0-Based Extension//EN"
"http://www.FreeBSD.org/XML/share/xml/freebsd50.dtd">
<article xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0" xml:lang="en">
<info><title>Remote Installation of the &os; Operating System without a
<info><title>Remote Installation of the &os; Operating System Without a
Remote Console</title>
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<para>In some cases, these companies will install your preferred
&linux; distribution if you request it. Using this option, we will
attempt to install &os;. In other cases, they may offer a rescue
system which would be used in an emergency. It's possible to use
system which would be used in an emergency. It is possible to use
this for our purposes as well.</para>
<para>This article covers the basic installation and configuration
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<para>Another important thing to set is the
<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> password. This can be done by editing
the <filename>conf/rootpw.conf</filename> file. Please keep in
<filename>conf/rootpw.conf</filename>. Please keep in
mind that the file will contain your password in the plain text,
thus we do not recommend to use real password here.
Nevertheless, this is just a temporary one-time password which
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initconf_netmask_ext1="255.255.255.0"</programlisting>
<para>Do not forget to add the <literal>defaultrouter</literal>
information to the <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename>
file:</para>
information to <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename>:</para>
<programlisting>defaultrouter="192.168.0.1"</programlisting>
</sect3>
<sect3>
<title>The <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename> method</title>
<title>The <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename> Method</title>
<para>When the network interface driver is known, it is more
convenient to use the <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename> file
convenient to use <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename>
for networking options. The syntax of this file is the same
as the one used in the standard &man.rc.conf.5; file of
&os;.</para>
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</sect2>
<sect2 xml:id="mfsbsd-build">
<title>Building an <application>mfsBSD</application> image</title>
<title>Building an <application>mfsBSD</application> Image</title>
<para>The process of building an <application>mfsBSD</application>
image is pretty straightforward.</para>
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<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make BASE=/cdrom/<replaceable>7.0-RELEASE</replaceable></userinput></screen>
<note>
<para>The above <command>make</command> command has to be run
<para>The above <command>make</command> has to be run
from the top level of the <application>mfsBSD</application>
directory tree, i.e. <filename>~/mfsbsd-1.0-beta1/</filename>.</para>
directory tree, for example <filename>~/mfsbsd-1.0-beta1/</filename>.</para>
</note>
</sect2>
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</sect1>
<sect1 xml:id="installation">
<title>Installation of The &os; Operating System</title>
<title>Installation of the &os; Operating System</title>
<para>The <application>mfsBSD</application> has been successfully
booted and it should be possible to log in through &man.ssh.1;.
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introduction, this article will present how to set up a system
with RAID-1 and <application>ZFS</application> capabilities.
Our set up will consist of a small &man.gmirror.8; mirrored
<filename>/</filename> (root), <filename>/usr</filename> and <filename>/var</filename> file systems, and the rest of
<filename>/</filename> (root), <filename>/usr</filename> and <filename>/var</filename> dataset, and the rest of
the disk space will be allocated for a &man.zpool.8; mirrored
<application>ZFS</application> file system. Please note, that
the <application>ZFS</application> file system will be
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</callout>
<callout arearefs="gmirror2">
<para>Note the <option>-F</option> option used for swap
<para>Note that <option>-F</option> is used for the swap
partition. This instructs &man.gmirror.8; to assume that
the device is in the consistent state after the power/system
failure.</para>
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</warning>
<para>Go to the <guimenuitem>Distributions</guimenuitem> menu,
move the cursor with the arrow keys on the
<option>Minimal</option> option, and check it by pressing
move the cursor with the arrow keys to
<option>Minimal</option>, and check it by pressing
<keycap>Space</keycap>. This article uses the Minimal
distribution in order to save network traffic, because the
system itself will be installed over
<application>ftp</application>. Exit this menu by choosing
<option>Exit</option> option.</para>
<option>Exit</option>.</para>
<note>
<para>The <guimenuitem>Partition</guimenuitem> and
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<filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename> and
<filename>/etc/fstab</filename> files. Do not forget to
properly set the network information and to enable
<application>sshd</application> in the
<filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> file. The contents of the
<filename>/etc/fstab</filename> file will be similar to the
<application>sshd</application> in
<filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>. The contents of
<filename>/etc/fstab</filename> will be similar to the
following:</para>
<programlisting># Device Mountpoint FStype Options Dump Pass#
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</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Create the <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename> file,
<para>Create <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>
with the following contents:</para>
<programlisting>geom_mirror_load="YES"
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&prompt.root; <userinput>zfs set mountpoint=/usr/ports tank/ports</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>zfs set mountpoint=/usr/src tank/src</userinput></screen>
<para>That's all. If you are interested in more details about
<para>That is all. If you are interested in more details about
<application>ZFS</application> on &os;, please refer to the <link xlink:href="http://wiki.freebsd.org/ZFS">ZFS</link> section of the &os;
Wiki.</para>
</sect1>