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<!DOCTYPE article PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD DocBook XML V5.0-Based Extension//EN"
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"http://www.FreeBSD.org/XML/share/xml/freebsd50.dtd">
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<article xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0" xml:lang="en">
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<info><title>Remote Installation of the &os; Operating System without a
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<info><title>Remote Installation of the &os; Operating System Without a
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Remote Console</title>
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<para>In some cases, these companies will install your preferred
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&linux; distribution if you request it. Using this option, we will
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attempt to install &os;. In other cases, they may offer a rescue
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system which would be used in an emergency. It's possible to use
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system which would be used in an emergency. It is possible to use
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this for our purposes as well.</para>
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<para>This article covers the basic installation and configuration
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<para>Another important thing to set is the
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<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> password. This can be done by editing
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the <filename>conf/rootpw.conf</filename> file. Please keep in
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<filename>conf/rootpw.conf</filename>. Please keep in
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mind that the file will contain your password in the plain text,
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thus we do not recommend to use real password here.
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Nevertheless, this is just a temporary one-time password which
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initconf_netmask_ext1="255.255.255.0"</programlisting>
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<para>Do not forget to add the <literal>defaultrouter</literal>
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information to the <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename>
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file:</para>
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information to <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename>:</para>
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<programlisting>defaultrouter="192.168.0.1"</programlisting>
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</sect3>
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<sect3>
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<title>The <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename> method</title>
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<title>The <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename> Method</title>
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<para>When the network interface driver is known, it is more
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convenient to use the <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename> file
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convenient to use <filename>conf/rc.conf</filename>
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for networking options. The syntax of this file is the same
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as the one used in the standard &man.rc.conf.5; file of
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&os;.</para>
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</sect2>
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<sect2 xml:id="mfsbsd-build">
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<title>Building an <application>mfsBSD</application> image</title>
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<title>Building an <application>mfsBSD</application> Image</title>
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<para>The process of building an <application>mfsBSD</application>
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image is pretty straightforward.</para>
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<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make BASE=/cdrom/<replaceable>7.0-RELEASE</replaceable></userinput></screen>
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<note>
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<para>The above <command>make</command> command has to be run
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<para>The above <command>make</command> has to be run
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from the top level of the <application>mfsBSD</application>
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directory tree, i.e. <filename>~/mfsbsd-1.0-beta1/</filename>.</para>
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directory tree, for example <filename>~/mfsbsd-1.0-beta1/</filename>.</para>
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</note>
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</sect2>
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</sect1>
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<sect1 xml:id="installation">
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<title>Installation of The &os; Operating System</title>
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<title>Installation of the &os; Operating System</title>
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<para>The <application>mfsBSD</application> has been successfully
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booted and it should be possible to log in through &man.ssh.1;.
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introduction, this article will present how to set up a system
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with RAID-1 and <application>ZFS</application> capabilities.
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Our set up will consist of a small &man.gmirror.8; mirrored
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<filename>/</filename> (root), <filename>/usr</filename> and <filename>/var</filename> file systems, and the rest of
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<filename>/</filename> (root), <filename>/usr</filename> and <filename>/var</filename> dataset, and the rest of
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the disk space will be allocated for a &man.zpool.8; mirrored
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<application>ZFS</application> file system. Please note, that
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the <application>ZFS</application> file system will be
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</callout>
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<callout arearefs="gmirror2">
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<para>Note the <option>-F</option> option used for swap
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<para>Note that <option>-F</option> is used for the swap
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partition. This instructs &man.gmirror.8; to assume that
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the device is in the consistent state after the power/system
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failure.</para>
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</warning>
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<para>Go to the <guimenuitem>Distributions</guimenuitem> menu,
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move the cursor with the arrow keys on the
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<option>Minimal</option> option, and check it by pressing
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move the cursor with the arrow keys to
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<option>Minimal</option>, and check it by pressing
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<keycap>Space</keycap>. This article uses the Minimal
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distribution in order to save network traffic, because the
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system itself will be installed over
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<application>ftp</application>. Exit this menu by choosing
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<option>Exit</option> option.</para>
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<option>Exit</option>.</para>
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<note>
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<para>The <guimenuitem>Partition</guimenuitem> and
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<filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename> and
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<filename>/etc/fstab</filename> files. Do not forget to
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properly set the network information and to enable
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<application>sshd</application> in the
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<filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> file. The contents of the
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<filename>/etc/fstab</filename> file will be similar to the
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<application>sshd</application> in
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<filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>. The contents of
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<filename>/etc/fstab</filename> will be similar to the
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following:</para>
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<programlisting># Device Mountpoint FStype Options Dump Pass#
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</listitem>
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<listitem>
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<para>Create the <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename> file,
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<para>Create <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>
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with the following contents:</para>
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<programlisting>geom_mirror_load="YES"
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&prompt.root; <userinput>zfs set mountpoint=/usr/ports tank/ports</userinput>
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&prompt.root; <userinput>zfs set mountpoint=/usr/src tank/src</userinput></screen>
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<para>That's all. If you are interested in more details about
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<para>That is all. If you are interested in more details about
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<application>ZFS</application> on &os;, please refer to the <link xlink:href="http://wiki.freebsd.org/ZFS">ZFS</link> section of the &os;
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Wiki.</para>
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</sect1>
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