Minor grammar / typo fixes in freebsd-update-server article

Submitted by:	sahil, Jason Helfman <jhelfman@experts-exchange.com>
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Manolis Kiagias 2011-02-14 20:41:53 +00:00
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url="&url.base;/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/projects/freebsd-update-server/">freebsd-update-server</ulink> software
is written by &a.cperciva;, current Security Officer of &os;.
For users that think it is convenient to update their systems
against an official update server, building an own &fbus.ap; may
against an official update server, building their own &fbus.ap; may
help to extend its functionality by supporting manually-tweaked
&os; releases or by providing a local mirror that will allow faster
updates for a number of machines.</para>
@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
It is sourced during all build operations.</para>
<para>Here is the default <filename>build.conf</filename>, which should
be modified to suite your own environment.</para>
be modified to suit your environment.</para>
<programlisting>
@ -789,7 +789,7 @@ the new builds.</screen>
<para>Adding <option>-j <replaceable>NUMBER</replaceable></option>
flags to <maketarget>buildworld</maketarget> and
<maketarget>obj</maketarget> targets in the
<filename>scripts/build.subr</filename> script, may speed up
<filename>scripts/build.subr</filename> script may speed up
processing depending on the hardware used, however it is not
necessary. Using these flags in other targets is not
recommended, as it may cause the build to become unreliable.</para>