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Front Page: wordsmith the description a bit

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Remove "advanced" which tells the user nothing, and is repeated later.
Remove "computer" in front of "operating system" which is a given.

"Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when
there is nothing left to take away"
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Eitan Adler 2017-12-27 11:32:11 +00:00
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<div id="frontfeaturecontent">
<h1>The &os; Project</h1>
<p>&os; is an advanced computer
<p>&os; is an
operating system used to power
modern servers, desktops, and
embedded