Minor wordsmithing close to the last revision.

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maintainer knew this beforehand, would it not? Not a good
start for that lovely weekend!</para>
<para>Now that you got the picture, just imagine more
<para>Now that you have the idea, just imagine more
<makevar>DISTFILES</makevar> and more
<makevar>MASTER_SITES</makevar>. Surely our
<quote>distfiles survey meister</quote> would appreciate the
network strain relieve this would bring.</para>
relief to network strain that this would bring.</para>
<para>In the next sections, information will follow on the
FreeBSD implementation of this idea. We improved a bit on