From 1f9a9b2730733ade9a9e7bb65ffc9f43bf9b4f62 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mike Pritchard
Date: Tue, 31 Dec 1996 22:31:13 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Avoid the use of contractions and fix some grammar problems
that were revealed. Note: I didn't go through all of the tutorials, so
there is still some work to be done here.
Made mailing addresses consistent with the handbook.
E.g:
freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG
instead of:
questions@freebsd.org
---
en/tutorials/index.sgml | 4 ++--
en/tutorials/newuser/newuser.sgml | 4 ++--
en_US.ISO_8859-1/tutorials/index.sgml | 4 ++--
3 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/en/tutorials/index.sgml b/en/tutorials/index.sgml
index 6b41bfb80b..c5b3c226eb 100644
--- a/en/tutorials/index.sgml
+++ b/en/tutorials/index.sgml
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-
+
%includes;
]>
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
Here lie assorted documents on various aspects of FreeBSD,
FreeBSD software, and hardare. If you have comments or
would like to contribute a document, please contact us at
- doc@FreeBSD.org.
+ freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org.
- For People New to Both FreeBSD and Unix
diff --git a/en/tutorials/newuser/newuser.sgml b/en/tutorials/newuser/newuser.sgml
index 9f63e518ca..e63d0acfb5 100644
--- a/en/tutorials/newuser/newuser.sgml
+++ b/en/tutorials/newuser/newuser.sgml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-
+
For People New to Both FreeBSD and Unix
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ You might especially want to make a file from /sbin/dmesg by typing
and copying dmesg.txt to the floppy. /sbin/dmesg is the boot
log record,
and it's useful to understand it because it shows what FreeBSD found
-when it booted up. If you ask questions on questions@freebsd.org or on
+when it booted up. If you ask questions on freebsd-questions@FreeBSD.ORG or on
a USENET group—like ``FreeBSD isn't finding my tape drive, what do I
do?''—people will want to know what dmesg has to say.
diff --git a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/tutorials/index.sgml b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/tutorials/index.sgml
index 6b41bfb80b..c5b3c226eb 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/tutorials/index.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/tutorials/index.sgml
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-
+
%includes;
]>
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
Here lie assorted documents on various aspects of FreeBSD,
FreeBSD software, and hardare. If you have comments or
would like to contribute a document, please contact us at
- doc@FreeBSD.org.
+ freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org.