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Fix a bunch of grammos and typos

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PR:		docs/176451
Submitted by:	Tom <trh411@gmail.com>
Approved by:	bcr (mentor)
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Eitan Adler 2013-02-27 21:23:57 +00:00
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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
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up-to-date, refer to <xref linkend="synching"/> for detailed
help about synchronizing to a newer version.</para>
<para>Updating the system from source is a more subtle than
it might initially seem to be, and the &os; developers have
<para>Updating the system from source is a more subtle process
than it might initially seem to be, and the &os; developers have
found it necessary over the years to change the recommended
approach fairly dramatically as new kinds of unavoidable
dependencies come to light. The rest of this section
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</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Some configuration changes must be done before the new
<para>Some configuration changes must be made before the new
world is installed, but others might break the old world.
Hence, two different configuration upgrade steps are
generally needed.</para>
@ -1946,7 +1946,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done.</screen>
<para><command>mergemaster</command></para>
<para>Repeated to update the remaining configuration files,
not that the new world is on disk.</para>
now that the new world is on disk.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@ -2217,7 +2217,7 @@ Script done, &hellip;</screen>
<para><emphasis>Do not</emphasis> save the output in <filename
class="directory">/tmp</filename> as this directory may be
cleared at next reboot. A better place to save the file is
<filename class="directory">/var/tmp</filename>or in
<filename class="directory">/var/tmp</filename> or in
<username>root</username>'s home directory.</para>
</sect3>
@ -2234,8 +2234,7 @@ Script done, &hellip;</screen>
<para>To rebuild the world, use &man.make.1;. This command
reads instructions from the <filename>Makefile</filename>,
which describes how the programs that comprise &os; should
be rebuilt and the order in which they should be
built.</para>
be built and the order in which they should be built.</para>
<para>The general format of the command is as follows:</para>
@ -2542,7 +2541,7 @@ Script done, &hellip;</screen>
<sect3>
<title>Manual Update</title>
<para>To instead perform the update manually, do not just copy
<para>To perform the update manually instead, do not just copy
over the files from
<filename class="directory">/usr/src/etc</filename> to
<filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and expect it to
@ -2580,7 +2579,7 @@ Script done, &hellip;</screen>
<para>Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the
new <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other
files into. <filename
files into <filename
class="directory">/var/tmp/root</filename> is a reasonable
choice:</para>
@ -2898,7 +2897,7 @@ Building everything..
<listitem>
<para>Turn off profiling by setting
<quote>NO_PROFILE=true</quote> in
<filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>).</para>
<filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>