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Fix a bunch of grammos and typos

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PR:		docs/176451
Submitted by:	Tom <trh411@gmail.com>
Approved by:	bcr (mentor)
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Eitan Adler 2013-02-27 21:23:57 +00:00
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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
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up-to-date, refer to <xref linkend="synching"/> for detailed up-to-date, refer to <xref linkend="synching"/> for detailed
help about synchronizing to a newer version.</para> help about synchronizing to a newer version.</para>
<para>Updating the system from source is a more subtle than <para>Updating the system from source is a more subtle process
it might initially seem to be, and the &os; developers have than it might initially seem to be, and the &os; developers have
found it necessary over the years to change the recommended found it necessary over the years to change the recommended
approach fairly dramatically as new kinds of unavoidable approach fairly dramatically as new kinds of unavoidable
dependencies come to light. The rest of this section dependencies come to light. The rest of this section
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</listitem> </listitem>
<listitem> <listitem>
<para>Some configuration changes must be done before the new <para>Some configuration changes must be made before the new
world is installed, but others might break the old world. world is installed, but others might break the old world.
Hence, two different configuration upgrade steps are Hence, two different configuration upgrade steps are
generally needed.</para> generally needed.</para>
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<para><command>mergemaster</command></para> <para><command>mergemaster</command></para>
<para>Repeated to update the remaining configuration files, <para>Repeated to update the remaining configuration files,
not that the new world is on disk.</para> now that the new world is on disk.</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
<listitem> <listitem>
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<para><emphasis>Do not</emphasis> save the output in <filename <para><emphasis>Do not</emphasis> save the output in <filename
class="directory">/tmp</filename> as this directory may be class="directory">/tmp</filename> as this directory may be
cleared at next reboot. A better place to save the file is cleared at next reboot. A better place to save the file is
<filename class="directory">/var/tmp</filename>or in <filename class="directory">/var/tmp</filename> or in
<username>root</username>'s home directory.</para> <username>root</username>'s home directory.</para>
</sect3> </sect3>
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<para>To rebuild the world, use &man.make.1;. This command <para>To rebuild the world, use &man.make.1;. This command
reads instructions from the <filename>Makefile</filename>, reads instructions from the <filename>Makefile</filename>,
which describes how the programs that comprise &os; should which describes how the programs that comprise &os; should
be rebuilt and the order in which they should be be built and the order in which they should be built.</para>
built.</para>
<para>The general format of the command is as follows:</para> <para>The general format of the command is as follows:</para>
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<sect3> <sect3>
<title>Manual Update</title> <title>Manual Update</title>
<para>To instead perform the update manually, do not just copy <para>To perform the update manually instead, do not just copy
over the files from over the files from
<filename class="directory">/usr/src/etc</filename> to <filename class="directory">/usr/src/etc</filename> to
<filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and expect it to <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and expect it to
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<para>Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the <para>Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the
new <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other new <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other
files into. <filename files into <filename
class="directory">/var/tmp/root</filename> is a reasonable class="directory">/var/tmp/root</filename> is a reasonable
choice:</para> choice:</para>
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<listitem> <listitem>
<para>Turn off profiling by setting <para>Turn off profiling by setting
<quote>NO_PROFILE=true</quote> in <quote>NO_PROFILE=true</quote> in
<filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>).</para> <filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>.</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
<listitem> <listitem>