From 221f2a4625107e8849108e536ac8881d4fd5021d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Ceri Davies Date: Thu, 30 Sep 2004 17:15:03 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Slightly reword a sentence to avoid comma hell. --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml index 69419c9691..a3af203bd6 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml @@ -2397,8 +2397,8 @@ device_probe_and_attach: cbb0 attach returned 12 embedded in the BIOS, and it operates outside the scope of the OS. This means users can only fix problems in their APM BIOS by flashing a new one into the ROM; which is a very dangerous - procedure, and if it fails, could leave the system in an - unrecoverable state. Thirdly, APM is a vendor-specific + procedure with the potential to leave the system in an + unrecoverable state if it fails. Thirdly, APM is a vendor-specific technology, which means that there is a lot of parity (duplication of efforts) and bugs found in one vendor's BIOS, may not be solved in others. Last but not the least, the APM