Editorial review of some more post-install config screens.

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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml

@@ -2135,13 +2135,10 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID: 830b92d4.</screen>
     <sect2 xml:id="bsdinstall-timezone">
       <title>Setting the Time Zone</title>
 
-      <para>Setting the time zone for the machine will allow it to
+      <para>The next menu asks if the system clock
-	automatically correct for any regional time changes and
+	uses <acronym>UTC</acronym> or local time.  When in doubt, select
-	perform other time zone related functions properly.</para>
+	<guibutton>[&nbsp;No&nbsp;]</guibutton> to choose the more
-
+	commonly-used local time.</para>
-      <para>The example shown is for a machine located in the Eastern
-	time zone of the United States.  The selections will vary
-	according to the geographical location.</para>
 
       <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-local-utc">
 	<title>Select Local or UTC Clock</title>
@@ -2154,13 +2151,16 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID: 830b92d4.</screen>
 	</mediaobject>
       </figure>
 
-      <para>Select <guibutton>[&nbsp;Yes&nbsp;]</guibutton>
+      <para>The next series of menus are used to determine the
-	or <guibutton>[&nbsp;No&nbsp;]</guibutton> according to how
+	correct local time by selecting the geographic region, country,
-	the machine's clock is configured and press
+	and time zone.  Setting the time zone allows the system to
-	<keycap>Enter</keycap>.  If it is not known whether the system
+	automatically correct for regional time changes, such as
-	uses UTC or local time, select
+	daylight savings time, and
-	<guibutton>[&nbsp;No&nbsp;]</guibutton> to choose the more
+	perform other time zone related functions properly.</para>
-	commonly-used local time.</para>
+
+      <para>The example shown here is for a machine located in the Eastern
+	time zone of the United States.  The selections will vary
+	according to the geographical location.</para>
 
       <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-timezone-region">
 	<title>Select a Region</title>
@@ -2215,15 +2215,17 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID: 830b92d4.</screen>
       </figure>
 
       <para>Confirm the abbreviation for the time zone is correct.  If
-	it looks okay, press <keycap>Enter</keycap> to continue with
+	it is, press <keycap>Enter</keycap> to continue with
 	the post-installation configuration.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="bsdinstall-sysconf">
-      <title>Selecting Services to Enable</title>
+      <title>Enabling Services</title>
 
-      <para>Additional system services which will be started at boot
+      <para>The next menu is used to configure which system services
-	can be enabled.  All of these services are optional.</para>
+	will be started whenever the system boots.
+	All of these services are optional.  Only start the services
+	that are needed for the system to function.</para>
 
       <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-config-serv">
 	<title>Selecting Additional Services to Enable</title>
@@ -2236,24 +2238,30 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID: 830b92d4.</screen>
 	</mediaobject>
       </figure>
 
+      <para>Here is a summary of the services which can be enabled in
+	this menu:</para>
+
       <itemizedlist>
-	<title>Additional Services</title>
-
 	<listitem>
-	  <para><literal>sshd</literal> - Secure Shell
+	  <para><literal>sshd</literal> - The Secure Shell
-	    (<acronym>SSH</acronym>) daemon for secure remote
+	    (<acronym>SSH</acronym>) daemon is used to remotely
-	    access.</para>
+	    access a system over an encrypted connection.  Only enable
+	    this service if the system should be available for remote
+	    logins.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para><literal>moused</literal> - Provides mouse usage
+	  <para><literal>moused</literal> - Enable this service if the
-	    within the system console.</para>
+	    mouse will be used from the command-line system
+	    console.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para><literal>ntpd</literal> - Network Time Protocol
+	  <para><literal>ntpd</literal> - The Network Time Protocol
 	    (<acronym>NTP</acronym>) daemon for automatic clock
-	    synchronization.</para>
+	    synchronization.  Enable this service if there is a
+	    &windows;, Kerberos, or <acronym>LDAP</acronym> server on
+	    the network.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
@@ -2266,13 +2274,10 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID: 830b92d4.</screen>
     <sect2 xml:id="bsdinstall-crashdump">
       <title>Enabling Crash Dumps</title>
 
-      <para><application>bsdinstall</application> will prompt if crash
+      <para>The next menu is used to configure whether or not crash
-	dumps should be enabled on the target system.  Enabling crash
+	dumps should be enabled.  Enabling crash
-	dumps can be very useful in debugging issues with the system,
+	dumps can be useful in debugging issues with the system,
-	so users are encouraged to enable crash dumps whenever
+	so users are encouraged to enable crash dumps.</para>
-	possible.  Select <guibutton>[&nbsp;Yes&nbsp;]</guibutton> to
-	enable crash dumps, or <guibutton>[&nbsp;No&nbsp;]</guibutton>
-	to proceed without crash dumps enabled.</para>
 
       <figure xml:id="bsdinstall-config-crashdump">
 	<title>Enabling Crash Dumps</title>