From 241bd769867bc0189c5ce71c7478a4f625e5d734 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Thu, 22 Jan 2004 20:23:39 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] o s/dismount/unmount/

o Various grammatical changes
---
 en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/new-users/article.sgml | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/new-users/article.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/new-users/article.sgml
index 405d36f0ad..217db468e5 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/new-users/article.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/new-users/article.sgml
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
       to the first line (the group <groupname>wheel</groupname>).  But
       first you need to practice &man.vi.1;, the text editor&mdash;or
       use the simpler text editor, &man.ee.1;, installed on recent
-      version of FreeBSD.</para>
+      versions of FreeBSD.</para>
 
     <para>To delete a user, use the <command>rmuser</command>
       command.</para>
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@
 	    <replaceable>filename</replaceable>) without changing it.
 	    Try <command>view
 	    <parameter>/etc/fstab</parameter></command>.
-	    <command>:q</command> to quit.</para>
+	    Type <command>:q</command> to quit.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 
@@ -384,8 +384,8 @@
       on a database that is rebuilt weekly.  If your machine is not
       going to be left on over the weekend (and running FreeBSD), you
       might want to run the commands for daily, weekly, and monthly
-      maintenance now and then.  Run them as <username>root</username> and give each one
-      time to finish before you start the next one, for now.</para>
+      maintenance now and then.  Run them as <username>root</username> and, for now, give each one
+      time to finish before you start the next one.</para>
 
     <informalexample>
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>periodic daily</userinput>
@@ -672,7 +672,7 @@
       what do I do?</quote>&mdash;people will want to know what
       <command>dmesg</command> has to say.</para>
 
-    <para>You can now dismount the floppy drive (as <username>root</username>) to get the
+    <para>You can now unmount the floppy drive (as <username>root</username>) to get the
       disk out with</para>
 
     <informalexample>
@@ -1030,7 +1030,7 @@ setenv XNLSPATH /usr/X11R6/lib/X11/nls</programlisting>
   <sect1>
     <title>Other</title>
 
-    <para>As <username>root</username>, you can dismount the CDROM with
+    <para>As <username>root</username>, you can unmount the CDROM with
       <command>/sbin/umount /cdrom</command>, take it out of the
       drive, insert another one, and mount it with
       <command>/sbin/mount_cd9660 /dev/cd0a /cdrom</command> assuming