From 249b68345eddc9e2d9ba122fd4f10a2b3d9e89f4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sun, 18 Jul 2004 13:14:06 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] In IPv6 section: - Some punctuation and uppercase fixes -
 Remove contractions and s/config file/configuration file/

---
 .../books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml    | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
index 8c1f960310..1170741f53 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
@@ -3824,7 +3824,7 @@ gif0: flags=8010&lt;POINTOPOINT,MULTICAST&gt; mtu 1280
 	  <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>:</para>
 
 	<para>List the Generic Tunneling interfaces that will be configured, for
-	  example: <devicename>gif0</devicename></para>
+	  example <devicename>gif0</devicename>:</para>
 
 	<programlisting>gif_interfaces="gif0"</programlisting>
 
@@ -3840,7 +3840,7 @@ gif0: flags=8010&lt;POINTOPOINT,MULTICAST&gt; mtu 1280
 	<programlisting>ipv6_ifconfig_gif0="<replaceable>MY_ASSIGNED_IPv6_TUNNEL_ENDPOINT_ADDR</replaceable>"</programlisting>
 
 	<para>Then all you have to do is set the default route for IPv6.  This is
-	  the other side of the IPv6 Tunnel.</para>
+	  the other side of the IPv6 tunnel:</para>
 
 	<programlisting>ipv6_defaultrouter="<replaceable>MY_IPv6_REMOTE_TUNNEL_ENDPOINT_ADDR</replaceable>"</programlisting>
 
@@ -3853,7 +3853,7 @@ gif0: flags=8010&lt;POINTOPOINT,MULTICAST&gt; mtu 1280
       <para>This section will help you setup &man.rtadvd.8; to advertise the
 	IPv6 default route.</para>
 
-      <para>To enable &man.rtadvd.8; you'll need the following in your
+      <para>To enable &man.rtadvd.8; you will need the following in your
 	<filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>:</para>
 
       <programlisting>rtadvd_enable="YES"</programlisting>
@@ -3864,7 +3864,7 @@ gif0: flags=8010&lt;POINTOPOINT,MULTICAST&gt; mtu 1280
 
       <programlisting>rtadvd_interfaces="fxp0"</programlisting>
 
-      <para>Now we must create the config file,
+      <para>Now we must create the configuration file,
 	<filename>/etc/rtadvd.conf</filename>.  Here is an example:</para>
 
       <programlisting>fxp0:\
@@ -3877,7 +3877,7 @@ gif0: flags=8010&lt;POINTOPOINT,MULTICAST&gt; mtu 1280
 	with the prefix of your allocation.</para>
 
       <para>If you are dedicated a <hostid role="netmask">/64</hostid> subnet
-	you won't need to change anything else.  Otherwise, you will need to
+	you will not need to change anything else.  Otherwise, you will need to
 	change the <literal>prefixlen#</literal> to the correct value.</para>
 
    </sect2>