From 25d00cc4a621f19fdf0c75039c29b956cdb88bf2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Rhodes Date: Wed, 9 Nov 2005 02:56:21 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Reword a paragraph to make it more clear, Use &os; in place of FreeBSD, Avoid "sexist" language. --- .../books/developers-handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml | 7 +++---- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml index b522c8ab34..680a868792 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml @@ -30,10 +30,9 @@ These are some questions which this chapter tries to answer. Of course, programming has different levels of proficiency like any other trade. For some it is a hobby, for others it is their - profession. The information in this chapter might be more aimed - towards the beginning programmer, but may also serve to be - useful for the programmer taking her first steps on the FreeBSD - platform. + profession. The information in this chapter might be aimed + toward the beginning programmer; indeed, it could serve useful + for the programmer unfamiliar with the &os; platform.