Wording tweaks for my own text (intro, status). Other than style, it looks

like this report is about ready to go (and only a month or two late).

en/news/status/report-may-2002-june-2002.html

@@ -42,32 +42,27 @@
     <p>May and June were remarkably busy months for the FreeBSD
     Project-- FreeBSD developers met in Monterey, CA in June for
     FreeBSD Developer Summit III to discuss strategy for the
-    FreeBSD 5.0 release later this year, and for the USENIX Annual
+    FreeBSD 5.0 release later this year, for the USENIX Annual
-    Technical conference and the FreeBSD BoF. Substantial technical
+    Technical conference and for the FreeBSD BoF. Substantial
-    progress was made on FreeBSD 5.0, and another release was cut
+    technical progress was made on FreeBSD 5.0, and FreeBSD
-    on the RELENG_4 branch, 4.6-RELEASE in June.</p>
+    4.6-RELEASE was cut on the RELENG_4 branch in June.</p>
 
-    <p>The remainder of the summer will be busy. Final development
+    <p>The remainder of the summer will continue to busy. Fina
     components and features for 5.0-RELEASE will go into the tree,
     and the development direction will change from new features to
     stability, performance, and production-readiness. With
     additional 5.0 development previews late in the summer, we hope
-    to broaden the tester base for the 5.0 technologies, and start
+    to broaden the tester base for the -CURRENT branch, and start
     to get early adopters digging out any potential problems in
-    their test environment.</p>
+    their test environments. I encourage both FreeBSD Developers
+    and FreeBSD Users to give 5.0-DP2 a spin (on a machine without
+    critical data!) and let us know how it goes. The more testing
+    that happens before the release, the less fixing we have to do
+    afterwards!</p>
 
     <p>Robert Watson</p>
 
     <ul>
-      <li><a href=
-      "#&quot;GEOM&quot;---generalized-block-storage-manipulation">&quot;GEOM&quot;
-      - generalized block storage manipulation</a></li>
-
-      <li><a href=
-      "#&quot;UFS2&quot;---Extended-attribute-and-large-size-support-for-UFS">
-      &quot;UFS2&quot; - Extended attribute and large size support
-      for UFS</a></li>
-
       <li><a href=
       "#Bluetooth-stack-for-FreeBSD-(Netgraph-implementation)">Bluetooth
       stack for FreeBSD (Netgraph implementation)</a></li>
@@ -97,6 +92,10 @@
       <li><a href="#FreeBSD/KGI-Status-Report">FreeBSD/KGI Status
       Report</a></li>
 
+      <li><a href=
+      "#GEOM---generalized-block-storage-manipulation">GEOM -
+      generalized block storage manipulation</a></li>
+
       <li><a href="#Hardware-Crypto-Support-Status">Hardware Crypto
       Support Status</a></li>
 
@@ -157,6 +156,10 @@
 
       <li><a href="#TrustedBSD-MAC">TrustedBSD MAC</a></li>
 
+      <li><a href=
+      "#UFS2---Extended-attribute-and-large-size-support-for-UFS">UFS2
+      - Extended attribute and large size support for UFS</a></li>
+
       <li><a href="#Userland-Regression-Tests">Userland Regression
       Tests</a></li>
 
@@ -164,46 +167,6 @@
       Sockets status report</a></li>
     </ul>
 
-    <h2><a name=
-    "&quot;GEOM&quot;---generalized-block-storage-manipulation">&quot;GEOM&quot;
-    - generalized block storage manipulation</a></h2>
-
-    <p>URL: <a href=
-    "http://www.freebsd.org/~phk/Geom/">http://www.freebsd.org/~phk/Geom/</a></p>
-
-    <p>Contact: Poul-Henning Kamp &lt;<a href=
-    "mailto:phk@FreeBSD.org">phk@FreeBSD.org</a>&gt;</p>
-
-    <p>The GEOM code has gotten so far that it beats our current
-    code in some areas while stil lacking in others. The goal is
-    for GEOM to be the default in 5.0-RELEASE.</p>
-
-    <p>Currently work on a cryptographic module which should be
-    able to protect a diskpartition from practically any sort of
-    attack is progressing.</p>
-    <hr>
-
-    <h2><a name=
-    "&quot;UFS2&quot;---Extended-attribute-and-large-size-support-for-UFS">
-    &quot;UFS2&quot; - Extended attribute and large size support
-    for UFS</a></h2>
-
-    <p>Contact: Poul-Henning Kamp &lt;<a href=
-    "mailto:phk@FreeBSD.org">phk@FreeBSD.org</a>&gt;<br>
-     Contact: Kirk Mckusick &lt;<a href=
-    "mailto:mckusick@FreeBSD.org">mckusick@FreeBSD.org</a>&gt;</p>
-
-    <p>UFS2 is an extension to the well-known UFS filesystem which
-    using a new inode format adds support for &quot;64bit
-    everywhere&quot; and later for extended attribute support, in
-    addition to the current UFS features: soft-updates and
-    snapshots.</p>
-
-    <p>The basic UFS2 code has been committed and work on the
-    extended attribute interface and vnode operations will
-    continue.</p>
-    <hr>
-
     <h2><a name=
     "Bluetooth-stack-for-FreeBSD-(Netgraph-implementation)">Bluetooth
     stack for FreeBSD (Netgraph implementation)</a></h2>
@@ -503,6 +466,25 @@
     (iic(4)) infrastructure.</p>
     <hr>
 
+    <h2><a name=
+    "GEOM---generalized-block-storage-manipulation">GEOM -
+    generalized block storage manipulation</a></h2>
+
+    <p>URL: <a href=
+    "http://www.freebsd.org/~phk/Geom/">http://www.freebsd.org/~phk/Geom/</a></p>
+
+    <p>Contact: Poul-Henning Kamp &lt;<a href=
+    "mailto:phk@FreeBSD.org">phk@FreeBSD.org</a>&gt;</p>
+
+    <p>The GEOM code has gotten so far that it beats our current
+    code in some areas while stil lacking in others. The goal is
+    for GEOM to be the default in 5.0-RELEASE.</p>
+
+    <p>Currently work on a cryptographic module which should be
+    able to protect a diskpartition from practically any sort of
+    attack is progressing.</p>
+    <hr>
+
     <h2><a name="Hardware-Crypto-Support-Status">Hardware Crypto
     Support Status</a></h2>
 
@@ -1112,12 +1094,33 @@
     subjects and file system objects. Provide ugidfw, a tool for
     managing rules for the mac_bsdextended policy.</p>
 
-    <p>Massive diff reduction. Merge KSEIII.</p>
+    <p>Massive diff reduction. KSEIII merged. Main tree integration
+    will begin shortly.</p>
 
     <p>Updated prototype code may be retrieved from the TrustedBSD
     CVS trees on cvsup10.FreeBSD.org.</p>
     <hr>
 
+    <h2><a name=
+    "UFS2---Extended-attribute-and-large-size-support-for-UFS">UFS2
+    - Extended attribute and large size support for UFS</a></h2>
+
+    <p>Contact: Poul-Henning Kamp &lt;<a href=
+    "mailto:phk@FreeBSD.org">phk@FreeBSD.org</a>&gt;<br>
+     Contact: Kirk Mckusick &lt;<a href=
+    "mailto:mckusick@FreeBSD.org">mckusick@FreeBSD.org</a>&gt;</p>
+
+    <p>UFS2 is an extension to the well-known UFS filesystem which
+    using a new inode format adds support for &quot;64bit
+    everywhere&quot; and later for extended attribute support, in
+    addition to the current UFS features: soft-updates and
+    snapshots.</p>
+
+    <p>The basic UFS2 code has been committed and work on the
+    extended attribute interface and vnode operations will
+    continue.</p>
+    <hr>
+
     <h2><a name="Userland-Regression-Tests">Userland Regression
     Tests</a></h2>