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Simplify some of the text on the home page.

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Submitted by:	Allan Jude <freebsd@allanjude.com>
Discussed with:	wblock, bjk, jhs
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Eitan Adler 2013-10-04 04:22:26 +00:00
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<div id="frontfeatureleft">
<div id="frontfeaturecontent">
<h1>
Based on BSD &unix;
</h1>
<h1>The &os; Project</h1>
<p>FreeBSD&reg; is an advanced
operating system for modern server,
desktop, and embedded computer <a
href="&base;/platforms/">platforms</a>.
FreeBSD's code base has undergone
over thirty years of continuous
development, improvement, and
optimization. It is developed and
maintained by a <a
href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/staff-committers.html">large
team of individuals</a>. FreeBSD
provides advanced networking,
impressive security features, and
world class performance and is used
by some of the world's <a
href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/nutshell.html#introduction-nutshell-users">busiest
web sites</a> and most pervasive
<p>&os; is an advanced computer
operating system used to power
modern servers, desktops and
embedded
<a href="&base;/platforms/">platforms</a>.
A large
<a
href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/staff-committers.html">community</a>
has continually developed it for
more than thirty years. Its advanced
networking, security and storage
features have made &os; the platform
of choice for many of the
<a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/nutshell.html#introduction-nutshell-users">busiest web sites</a>
and most pervasive
embedded networking and storage
devices.</p>
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<div class="frontgetroundbox">
<div class="frontgettop"><div><b style="display: none">.</b></div></div>
<div class="frontgetcontent">
<a href="&base;/where.html">Get FreeBSD Now</a>
<a href="&base;/where.html">Download &os;</a>
</div> <!-- frontgetcontent -->
<div class="frontgetbot"><div><b style="display: none">.</b></div></div>
</div> <!-- frontgetroundbox -->
@ -237,7 +233,7 @@
<div id="frontmedia">
<div id="frontmediacontent" class="txtnewsevent">
<h2>IN THE MEDIA</h2>
<h2>PRESS</h2>
<div class="newseventswrap">
<xsl:call-template name="html-index-news-press-items">