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Remove a confusing paragraph whose net contribution is negative. Remove

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some   from "Ports Collection", it's unnecessary.  Make one example
section consistent with the actual code.
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Warren Block 2013-07-09 06:27:56 +00:00
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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml
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@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
should be presented.</para>
<para>The DocBook <acronym>DTD</acronym> is available from the
Ports&nbsp;Collection in the
Ports Collection in the
<filename role="package">textproc/docbook-xml-450</filename>
port. It is automatically installed as part of the
<filename role="package">textproc/docproj</filename>
@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
</note>
<para>The &os; extensions are not (currently) in the
Ports&nbsp;Collection. They are stored in the &os; Subversion
Ports Collection. They are stored in the &os; Subversion
tree, as <ulink
url="http://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/doc/head/share/xml/freebsd.dtd">head/share/xml/freebsd.dtd</ulink>.</para>
</sect1>
@ -1225,9 +1225,6 @@ This is the file called 'foo2'</screen>
This makes the generated output, especially
<acronym>HTML</acronym>, appear visually better.</para>
<para>This can be confusing, and sometimes the choice is not
always clear. Hopefully this example makes it clearer.</para>
<example>
<title>Applications, Commands, and Options</title>
@ -1320,7 +1317,7 @@ This is the file called 'foo2'</screen>
</note>
<para>To include the name of a program from the &os;
Ports&nbsp;Collection in the document, use the
Ports Collection in the document, use the
<sgmltag>filename</sgmltag> tag with the
<literal>role</literal> attribute set to
<literal>package</literal>. Since ports can be installed in
@ -2167,8 +2164,8 @@ IMAGES= chapter1/fig1.png
<sgmltag class="starttag">link linkend="introduction"</sgmltag>sample introduction<sgmltag class="endtag">link</sgmltag>.<sgmltag class="endtag">para</sgmltag>
<sgmltag class="starttag">para</sgmltag>More specific information can be found in the
<sgmltag class="starttag">link linkend="introduction-moredetails"</sgmltag>sample introduction with
more details<sgmltag class="endtag">link</sgmltag> section.<sgmltag class="endtag">para</sgmltag></programlisting>
<sgmltag class="starttag">link linkend="introduction-moredetails"</sgmltag>sample introduction with more
details<sgmltag class="endtag">link</sgmltag> section.<sgmltag class="endtag">para</sgmltag></programlisting>
<para>This output will be generated
(<emphasis>emphasized</emphasis> text is used to show the