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handbook/disks.sgml

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 <!-- This is an SGML document in the linuxdoc DTD describing
      Disks and FreeBSD.  By David O'Brien, 1998.
 
-     $Id: disks.sgml,v 1.2 1998-05-13 19:02:29 obrien Exp $
+     $Id: disks.sgml,v 1.3 1998-05-15 09:36:42 obrien Exp $
 
      The FreeBSD Documentation Project
 
@@ -29,13 +29,13 @@
 	controller, and drive manufacturer.  Due the wide variations of procedures
 	to do this, the details are beyond the scope of this document.
 
-	Login as user <it>root</it>.  After you've installed the drive,
+	<p>Login as user <it>root</it>.  After you've installed the drive,
 	inspect <tt>/var/run/dmesg.boot</tt> to ensure the new disk was found.
 	Continuing with our example, the newly added drive will be <tt>sd1</tt>
 	and we want to mount it on <tt>/1</tt>.
 	(if you are adding an IDE drive substitute <tt>wd</tt> for <tt>sd</tt>)
 
-	Because FreeBSD runs on IBM-PC compatible computers, it must take into
+	<p>Because FreeBSD runs on IBM-PC compatible computers, it must take into
 	account the PC BIOS partitions.  These are different from the traditional
 	BSD partitions.  A PC disk has up to four BIOS partition entries.  If the
 	disk is going to be truly dedicated to FreeBSD, you can use the
@@ -44,15 +44,15 @@
 	<it>slices</it> so as not to confuse them with traditional BSD
 	partitions.  You may also use slices on a disk that is dedicated to
 	FreeBSD, but used in a computer that also has another operating system
-	installed.  This is not confuse the <tt>fdisk</tt> utility of the other
+	installed.  This is to not confuse the <tt>fdisk</tt> utility of the other
 	operating system.
 
-	In the slice case the drive will be added as <tt>/dev/sd1s1e</tt>.
+	<p>In the slice case the drive will be added as <tt>/dev/sd1s1e</tt>.
 	This is read as:  SCSI disk, unit number 1 (second SCSI disk), slice 1
 	(PC BIOS partition 1), and <tt>e</tt> BSD partition.
 	In the dedicated case, the drive will be added simply as <tt>/dev/sd1e</tt>.
 
-    <sect><heading> Using systinstall</heading>
+    <sect><heading> Using sysinstall</heading>
 	<p> You may use <tt>/stand/sysinstall</tt> to partition and label a new
 	disk using its easy to use menus.  Either login as user <it>root</it>
 	or use the <tt>su</tt> command.  Run <tt>/stand/sysinstall</tt> and enter
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
 	installation and <tt>dmesg</tt> output in the file
 	<tt>/var/run/dmesg.boot</tt>.
 
-	Select <tt>sd1</tt> to enter the <tt>FDISK Partition Editor</tt>.
+	<p>Select <tt>sd1</tt> to enter the <tt>FDISK Partition Editor</tt>.
 	Choose <tt>A</tt> to use the entire disk for FreeBSD.  When asked if you
 	want to ``remain cooperative with any future possible operating systems'',
 	answer <it>YES</it>.  Write the changes to the disk using <it>W</it>.
@@ -71,30 +71,31 @@
 	Next you will be asked about the Master Boot Record.  Since you are
 	adding a disk to an already running system, choose <it>None</it>.
 
-	Next enter the <it>Disk Label Editor</it>.  This is where you will
+	<p>Next enter the <it>Disk Label Editor</it>.  This is where you will
 	create the traditional BSD partitions.  A disk can have up to eight
 	partitions, labeled a-h.  A few of the partition labels have special
 	uses.  The <it>a</it> partition is used for the root partition (/).
-	A system should only use the <it>a</it> partition on the system disk.
-	The <it>b</it> is used for swap partitions, and you may have many
-	disks with swap partitions.  The <it>c</it> partition addresses the
-	entire disk in dedicated mode, or the entire FreeBSD slice in slice
-	mode.  The other partitions are for general use.
+	Thus only your system disk (e.g, the disk you boot from) should have
+	an <it>a</it> partition.
+	The <it>b</it> partition is used for swap partitions, and you may
+	have many disks with swap partitions.  The <it>c</it> partition
+	addresses the entire disk in dedicated mode, or the entire FreeBSD
+	slice in slice mode.  The other partitions are for general use.
 
-	Sysinstall's Label editor favors the <it>e</it> partition for non-root,
+	<p>Sysinstall's Label editor favors the <it>e</it> partition for non-root,
 	non-swap partitions.  With in the Label editor, create a single file
 	system using <it>C</it>.  When prompted if this will be a FS (file 
-	system) or swap, choose ``FS'' and give a mount point.  Use
-	<tt>/mnt</tt>.  When adding a disk in post-install mode, Sysinstall
-	will not create entries in <tt>/etc/fstab</tt> for you.  So the
+	system) or swap, choose ``FS'' and give a mount point (e.g, 
+	<tt>/mnt</tt>).  When adding a disk in post-install mode, Sysinstall
+	will not create entries in <tt>/etc/fstab</tt> for you, so the
 	mount point you specify isn't important.
 
-	You are now ready to write the new label to the disk and create a
+	<p>You are now ready to write the new label to the disk and create a
 	file system on it.  Do this by hitting <it>W</it>.  Ignore any errors
 	from Sysinstall that it could not mount the new partition.  Exit
 	the Label Editor and Sysinstall completely.
 
-	The last step is to edit <tt>/etc/fstab</tt> to add an entry for your
+	<p>The last step is to edit <tt>/etc/fstab</tt> to add an entry for your
 	new disk.
 
     <sect><heading> Using command line utilities</heading>
@@ -105,6 +106,8 @@
 	<p>If you will not be sharing the new drive with another operating system,
 	you may use the <it>dedicated</it> mode.  Remember this mode can confuse
 	Microsoft operating systems; however, no damage will be done by them.
+	IBM's OS/2 however, will "appropriate" any partition it finds which
+	it doesn't understand.
     <tscreen><verb>
 	dd if=/dev/zero of=/dev/rsd1 bs=1k count=1
 	disklabel -Brw sd1 auto
@@ -120,7 +123,7 @@
     <tscreen><verb>
 	dd if=/dev/zero of=/dev/rsd1 count=2
 	disklabel /dev/rsd1 | disklabel -BrR sd1 /dev/stdin
-	newfs /dev/rsd1c
+	newfs /dev/rsd1e
 	mkdir -p /1
 	vi /etc/fstab					# add an entry for /dev/sd1e
 	mount /1