Grammar improvements.

PR:		84951
Submitted by:	David Adam <zanchey@ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au>
Reviewed by:	Dru Lavigne <dru@isecom.org>
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Murray Stokely 2005-08-16 00:36:54 +00:00
parent 06d387129e
commit 2c6e0e6cc4
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00
svn path=/head/; revision=25369

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@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ Release
<listitem><para>One of the problems associated with Open Source
software is the sheer volume of available applications. There
are literally 10s of 1000s of Open Source application projects
are literally tens of thousands of Open Source application projects
each with varying levels of responsiveness to security
incidents. FreeBSD has met this challenge head-on with <ulink
url="http://www.vuxml.org/freebsd/">VuXML</ulink>. All software
@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ Release
site: <ulink
url="http://www.freebsd.org/commercial/"></ulink></para></listitem>
<listitem><para>FreeBSDMall has been selling support contracts
<listitem><para>FreeBSDMall, who have been selling support contracts
for nearly 10 years.
<ulink url="http://www.freebsdmall.com"></ulink></para></listitem>