diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml index 71cb3baecb..cd3cde051a 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml @@ -643,7 +643,7 @@ before running "/usr/sbin/freebsd-update install" - Portsnap: A Ports Collection Update Tool + Portsnap: a Ports Collection Update Tool Updating and Upgrading @@ -1767,7 +1767,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. - Do not use <command>make world</command> + Do Not Use <command>make world</command> A lot of older documentation recommends using make world for this. Doing that skips @@ -1932,16 +1932,16 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. - Note that if you're upgrading from one release of the same &os; + Note that if you are upgrading from one release of the same &os; branch to a more recent release of the same branch, i.e., from 7.0 to 7.1, then this procedure may not be absolutely necessary, since - you're unlikely to run into serious mismatches between compiler, + you are unlikely to run into serious mismatches between compiler, kernel, userland and configuration files. The older approach of make world followed by building and installing a new kernel might work well enough for minor updates. - But, when upgrading across major releases, people who don't + But, when upgrading across major releases, people who do not follow this procedure should expect some problems. It is also worth noting that many upgrades @@ -2965,7 +2965,7 @@ Building everything.. - Deleting obsolete files, directories and libraries + Deleting Obsolete Files, Directories and Libraries Deleting obsolete files, directories and libraries @@ -3049,7 +3049,7 @@ Building everything.. role="package">ports-mgmt/portmaster and ports-mgmt/portupgrade utilities can be used to automate this process. After you've made sure that all ports are rebuilt - and do not use the old libraries anymore, you can delete them using the + and do not use the old libraries any more, you can delete them using the following command: &prompt.root; make delete-old-libs