diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
index 71cb3baecb..cd3cde051a 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
@@ -643,7 +643,7 @@ before running "/usr/sbin/freebsd-update install"
-
Portsnap: A Ports Collection Update Tool
+ Portsnap: a Ports Collection Update Tool
Updating and Upgrading
@@ -1767,7 +1767,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done.
- Do not use make world
+ Do Not Use make world
A lot of older documentation recommends using
make world for this. Doing that skips
@@ -1932,16 +1932,16 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done.
- Note that if you're upgrading from one release of the same &os;
+ Note that if you are upgrading from one release of the same &os;
branch to a more recent release of the same branch, i.e., from 7.0 to
7.1, then this procedure may not be absolutely necessary, since
- you're unlikely to run into serious mismatches between compiler,
+ you are unlikely to run into serious mismatches between compiler,
kernel, userland and configuration files. The older approach
of make world followed
by building and installing a new kernel might work well enough for
minor updates.
- But, when upgrading across major releases, people who don't
+ But, when upgrading across major releases, people who do not
follow this procedure should expect some problems.
It is also worth noting that many upgrades
@@ -2965,7 +2965,7 @@ Building everything..
- Deleting obsolete files, directories and libraries
+ Deleting Obsolete Files, Directories and Libraries
Deleting obsolete files, directories and libraries
@@ -3049,7 +3049,7 @@ Building everything..
role="package">ports-mgmt/portmaster and ports-mgmt/portupgrade utilities can be used to
automate this process. After you've made sure that all ports are rebuilt
- and do not use the old libraries anymore, you can delete them using the
+ and do not use the old libraries any more, you can delete them using the
following command:
&prompt.root; make delete-old-libs