From 2f0d83c178fab76b845e00be3f72d1c97e823c2c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Tue, 1 Mar 2005 02:34:03 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] A slightly improved 1.52.

---
 en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.sgml | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.sgml
index 9bc73e537a..a154f8336b 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.sgml
@@ -633,12 +633,12 @@ export LD_PRELOAD</programlisting>
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_add -r openoffice</userinput></screen>
 
       <note>
-        <para>When running a -RELEASE version of &os; this will work.
-	  Otherwise you should look on the &os; OpenOffice Porting Team
-	  web site and download and install the appropriate package
+	<para>When running a -RELEASE version of &os;, this should work.
+	  Otherwise, you should look on the &os; OpenOffice Porting Team's
+	  web site to download and install the appropriate package
 	  using &man.pkg.add.1;.  Both the current release and
 	  development version are available for download at this
-	  site.</para>
+	  location.</para>
       </note>
 
       <para>Once the package is installed, you must run the setup