From 2fa6b7ef3f997da16bca03e89ebb1118296793ff Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Tue, 21 Aug 2001 23:44:13 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Reword part of the synopsis in a slightly more formal way. 
 Remove a "Should you have any questions or suggestions, please email the
 author" line that doesn't belong in an individual chapter.

---
 en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml | 14 +++++---------
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml
index fc8813b2a8..56dc7bf10f 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!--
      The FreeBSD Documentation Project
 
-     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml,v 1.65 2001/08/09 23:42:32 chern Exp $
+     $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/l10n/chapter.sgml,v 1.66 2001/08/10 22:58:14 chern Exp $
 -->
 
 <chapter id="l10n">
@@ -36,14 +36,10 @@
       Hence, the user should contact the respective FreeBSD local group
       that is responsible for each language.</para>
 
-    <para>The author realizes that he may have been incomplete in the
-      description of the I18N process in FreeBSD.  Due to the various
-      levels of I18N implementation in both the system and application
-      levels, we advise you to refer to individual documentation, man
-      pages, READMEs, and so forth.</para>
-
-    <para>Should you have any questions or suggestions regarding this
-      chapter, please email the author.</para>
+    <para>There are many aspects of I18N implementation in
+      both the system and application levels, so where applicable we
+      refer the reader to individual documentation, man pages,
+      READMEs, and so forth.</para>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1>