diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml
index 5b2aa5b8d1..c10309c7d0 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml
@@ -100,14 +100,14 @@
&macos;.
While it is not necessary to understand all of the details of various
- X components and how they interact; some basic knowledge makes
+ X components and how they interact, some basic knowledge makes
it possible to take advantage of X's strengths.
Why X?
X is not the first window system written for &unix;, but it is the
- most popularof them. X's original development team had worked on another
+ most popular of them. X's original development team had worked on another
window system prior to writing X. That system's name was
W
(for Window
). X was just the next
letter in the Roman alphabet.
@@ -354,6 +354,12 @@
&prompt.root; pkg_add -r xorg
+
+ To build &xorg; in its
+ entirety, be sure to have at least 2GB of free space
+ available.
+
+
The &xfree86; 4.X package can be
installed by typing:
@@ -401,7 +407,7 @@
The &man.pkgdb.1; command is part of the
portupgrade software and will
- update various packages dependencies.
+ update various package dependencies.
To build &xorg; in its
@@ -507,7 +513,7 @@
&prompt.root; XFree86 -xf86config XF86Config.new
- If a black and grey grid and an X mouse cursor appears,
+ If a black and grey grid and an X mouse cursor appear,
the configuration was successful. To exit the test, just press
Ctrl
@@ -539,7 +545,7 @@ EndSection
The HorizSync and
VertRefresh keywords may be missing in the
- configuration file. If they do not, they need to be added, with
+ configuration file. If they are not, they need to be added, with
the correct horizontal synchronization rate placed after the
HorizSync keyword and the vertical
synchronization rate after the VertRefresh
@@ -599,9 +605,9 @@ EndSection
One of the tools available to assist you during
troubleshooting process are the X11 log files, which contain
information on each device that the X11 server attaches to.
- &xorg; log files are in the format
+ &xorg; log file names are in the format
of /var/log/Xorg.0.log
- (&xfree86; log files follow the
+ (&xfree86; log file names follow the
format of XFree86.0.log). The exact name
of the log can vary from Xorg.0.log to
Xorg.8.log and so forth.
@@ -635,7 +641,7 @@ EndSection
There is also a graphical configuration tool,
&man.xorgcfg.1; (&man.xf86cfg.1; for &xfree86;), that comes with the
X11 distribution. It
- allows to interactively define your configuration by choosing
+ allows you to interactively define your configuration by choosing
the appropriate drivers and settings. This program can be invoked from the console, by typing the command xorgcfg -textmode. For more details,
refer to the &man.xorgcfg.1; and &man.xf86cfg.1; manual pages.
@@ -857,7 +863,7 @@ EndSection
in /usr/X11R6/lib/X11/fonts/ and
~/.fonts/ are automatically
made available for anti-aliasing to Xft-aware applications. Not
- all applications are Xft-aware , but many have received Xft support.
+ all applications are Xft-aware, but many have received Xft support.
Examples of Xft-aware applications include Qt 2.3 and higher (the
toolkit for the KDE desktop),
GTK+ 2.0 and higher (the toolkit for the