From 357f80a5edf20218788da7f2f2e1f30e1daa29d7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Gregory Sutter <gsutter@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Tue, 29 May 2001 19:29:25 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Correct punctuation and grammar.

Reviewed by:	dd, chris
---
 .../articles/committers-guide/article.sgml         | 14 +++++++-------
 .../articles/committers-guide/article.sgml         | 14 +++++++-------
 2 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml
index 8e2df65c91..b086b12bb9 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
       </author>
     </authorgroup>
 
-    <pubdate>$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml,v 1.66 2001/05/12 08:07:35 obrien Exp $</pubdate>
+    <pubdate>$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml,v 1.67 2001/05/13 15:44:20 nik Exp $</pubdate>
 
     <copyright>
       <year>1999</year>
@@ -516,11 +516,11 @@
         </itemizedlist>
 
         <para>You'll almost certainly get a conflict because
-          of the <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.67 2001-05-13 15:44:20 nik Exp $</literal> (or in FreeBSD's case,
+          of the <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.68 2001-05-29 19:29:25 gsutter Exp $</literal> (or in FreeBSD's case,
           <literal>$FreeBSD<!-- stop expansion -->$</literal>) lines, so you'll have to edit
           the file to resolve the conflict (remove the marker lines and
-          the second <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.67 2001-05-13 15:44:20 nik Exp $</literal> line, leaving the original
-          <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.67 2001-05-13 15:44:20 nik Exp $</literal> line intact).</para>
+          the second <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.68 2001-05-29 19:29:25 gsutter Exp $</literal> line, leaving the original
+          <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.68 2001-05-29 19:29:25 gsutter Exp $</literal> line intact).</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -1267,8 +1267,8 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:nik:</programlisting>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>Respect existing maintainers if listed in the
-	  (<makevar>MAINTAINER</makevar> field in
+	<para>Respect existing maintainers (if listed in the
+	  <makevar>MAINTAINER</makevar> field in
 	  <filename>Makefile</filename> or in the
 	  <filename>MAINTAINER</filename> file in the top-level
 	  directory).</para>
@@ -1308,7 +1308,7 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:nik:</programlisting>
 
       <listitem>
 	<para>Respect all code freezes and read the
-	  <literal>committers</literal> mailing list on a timely basis
+	  <literal>committers</literal> mailing list in a timely manner
 	  so you know when a code freeze is in effect.</para>
       </listitem>
 
diff --git a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml
index 8e2df65c91..b086b12bb9 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO_8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO_8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
       </author>
     </authorgroup>
 
-    <pubdate>$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml,v 1.66 2001/05/12 08:07:35 obrien Exp $</pubdate>
+    <pubdate>$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.sgml,v 1.67 2001/05/13 15:44:20 nik Exp $</pubdate>
 
     <copyright>
       <year>1999</year>
@@ -516,11 +516,11 @@
         </itemizedlist>
 
         <para>You'll almost certainly get a conflict because
-          of the <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.67 2001-05-13 15:44:20 nik Exp $</literal> (or in FreeBSD's case,
+          of the <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.68 2001-05-29 19:29:25 gsutter Exp $</literal> (or in FreeBSD's case,
           <literal>$FreeBSD<!-- stop expansion -->$</literal>) lines, so you'll have to edit
           the file to resolve the conflict (remove the marker lines and
-          the second <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.67 2001-05-13 15:44:20 nik Exp $</literal> line, leaving the original
-          <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.67 2001-05-13 15:44:20 nik Exp $</literal> line intact).</para>
+          the second <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.68 2001-05-29 19:29:25 gsutter Exp $</literal> line, leaving the original
+          <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.68 2001-05-29 19:29:25 gsutter Exp $</literal> line intact).</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -1267,8 +1267,8 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:nik:</programlisting>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>Respect existing maintainers if listed in the
-	  (<makevar>MAINTAINER</makevar> field in
+	<para>Respect existing maintainers (if listed in the
+	  <makevar>MAINTAINER</makevar> field in
 	  <filename>Makefile</filename> or in the
 	  <filename>MAINTAINER</filename> file in the top-level
 	  directory).</para>
@@ -1308,7 +1308,7 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:nik:</programlisting>
 
       <listitem>
 	<para>Respect all code freezes and read the
-	  <literal>committers</literal> mailing list on a timely basis
+	  <literal>committers</literal> mailing list in a timely manner
 	  so you know when a code freeze is in effect.</para>
       </listitem>