From 3b97f0bbbfe4bfed873bb8efbef0bba4f290f18b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Michael Lucas <mwlucas@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Mon, 28 Jan 2002 13:24:58 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Reorganize and clarify these answers.  Implement symmetrical
 structure and syntax.

---
 en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml | 21 +++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml
index bf8af9dd48..bcf2f4a91b 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml
@@ -555,23 +555,20 @@
 
           <itemizedlist>
             <listitem>
-              <para>Using <application>CVSup</application>:
-                You can retrieve the formatted files
-                using <application>CVSup</application>, and connecting to
-                a <application>CVSup</application> server.</para>
-
-              <para>To retrieve the web pages, please look at the example
-                supfile, which can be found in
-                <filename>/usr/share/examples/cvsup/www-supfile</filename>.
+              <para>You can retrieve the formatted files from a
+                FreeBSD CVSup server using the application
+                <port>net/cvsup</port>.  The file
+                <filename>/usr/share/examples/cvsup/www-supfile</filename>
+                contains an example CVSup configuration file for web
+                mirrors.
               </para>
-
             </listitem>
 
             <listitem>
-              <para>Using FTP mirror:  You can download the FTP server's
-                copy of the web site sources using your favorite ftp mirror
+              <para>You can download the web site source code from any FreeBSD FTP server
+                using your favorite ftp mirror
                 tool.  Keep in mind that you have to build these sources before
-                publishing them.  Simply start at
+                publishing them.  Start mirroring at 
                 <ulink URL="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/FreeBSD-current/www">ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/FreeBSD-current/www</ulink>.</para>
             </listitem>
           </itemizedlist>