Remove the <bookbiblio> element. The front matter is now correctly

inserted in to the output.

Fix the author information.  Translators should just copy the <author>
element and subelements in to their translation.

Turn chapter 1 into a preface, removing the subsection.

<literallayout> -> <programlisting>, so that diagrams are preserved.

This still needs a lot of cleaning up (volunteers, anyone?) but it'll do
for the moment until I can scrounge some free time (some time around
December, the way things are going at the moment).
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@ -2,12 +2,15 @@
<book>
<bookinfo>
<bookbiblio>
<title>PPP - Pedantic PPP Primer</title>
<authorgroup>
<author>
<surname>Maintainer: Steve Sims <emphasis remap=tt><ulink URL="mailto:SimsS@IBM.NET">&lt;SimsS@IBM.NET&gt;</ulink></emphasis></surname>
<firstname>Steve</firstname>
<surname>Sims</surname>
<affiliation>
<address><email>SimsS@IBM.net</email></address>
</affiliation>
</author>
</authorgroup>
@ -17,10 +20,9 @@
a dial-up router/gateway in a Local Area Environment. All entries may
be assumed to be relevant to FreeBSD 2.2+, unless otherwise noted.</para></abstract>
</bookbiblio>
</bookinfo>
<chapter>
<preface>
<title>Overview:</title>
<para>The User-Mode PPP dialer in FreeBSD Version 2.2 (also known as:
@ -33,10 +35,6 @@ Service Provider. Systems on the LAN can use the FreeBSD system to
forward information between the Internet by means of a single
dial-connection.</para>
<sect1>
<title>Purpose of this Guide.</title>
<para>This guide explains how to:
<itemizedlist>
@ -61,8 +59,7 @@ to configure and install each individual component; each section stands
alone and may be used to assist in the configuration of various aspects
of FreeBSD internetworking.</para>
</sect1>
</chapter>
</preface>
<chapter>
<title>Building the Local Area Network</title>
@ -78,7 +75,7 @@ other Dial-Up service.</para>
<para>This guide assumes a typical Local Area Network lashed together as
follows:
<literallayout>
<programlisting>
+---------+ ----&gt; Dial-Up Internet Connection
| FreeBSD | \ (i.e.: NetCom, AOL, AT&amp;T, EarthLink,
etc)
@ -95,7 +92,7 @@ etc)
| Win95 | | WFW | | WinNT |
| "Larry" | | "Moe" | | "Shemp" |
| | | | | |
+---------+ +---------+ +---------+</literallayout>
+---------+ +---------+ +---------+</programlisting>
</para>
</sect1>

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@ -2,12 +2,15 @@
<book>
<bookinfo>
<bookbiblio>
<title>PPP - Pedantic PPP Primer</title>
<authorgroup>
<author>
<surname>Maintainer: Steve Sims <emphasis remap=tt><ulink URL="mailto:SimsS@IBM.NET">&lt;SimsS@IBM.NET&gt;</ulink></emphasis></surname>
<firstname>Steve</firstname>
<surname>Sims</surname>
<affiliation>
<address><email>SimsS@IBM.net</email></address>
</affiliation>
</author>
</authorgroup>
@ -17,10 +20,9 @@
a dial-up router/gateway in a Local Area Environment. All entries may
be assumed to be relevant to FreeBSD 2.2+, unless otherwise noted.</para></abstract>
</bookbiblio>
</bookinfo>
<chapter>
<preface>
<title>Overview:</title>
<para>The User-Mode PPP dialer in FreeBSD Version 2.2 (also known as:
@ -33,10 +35,6 @@ Service Provider. Systems on the LAN can use the FreeBSD system to
forward information between the Internet by means of a single
dial-connection.</para>
<sect1>
<title>Purpose of this Guide.</title>
<para>This guide explains how to:
<itemizedlist>
@ -61,8 +59,7 @@ to configure and install each individual component; each section stands
alone and may be used to assist in the configuration of various aspects
of FreeBSD internetworking.</para>
</sect1>
</chapter>
</preface>
<chapter>
<title>Building the Local Area Network</title>
@ -78,7 +75,7 @@ other Dial-Up service.</para>
<para>This guide assumes a typical Local Area Network lashed together as
follows:
<literallayout>
<programlisting>
+---------+ ----&gt; Dial-Up Internet Connection
| FreeBSD | \ (i.e.: NetCom, AOL, AT&amp;T, EarthLink,
etc)
@ -95,7 +92,7 @@ etc)
| Win95 | | WFW | | WinNT |
| "Larry" | | "Moe" | | "Shemp" |
| | | | | |
+---------+ +---------+ +---------+</literallayout>
+---------+ +---------+ +---------+</programlisting>
</para>
</sect1>