Remove the <bookbiblio> element. The front matter is now correctly

inserted in to the output.

Fix the author information.  Translators should just copy the <author>
element and subelements in to their translation.

Turn chapter 1 into a preface, removing the subsection.

<literallayout> -> <programlisting>, so that diagrams are preserved.

This still needs a lot of cleaning up (volunteers, anyone?) but it'll do
for the moment until I can scrounge some free time (some time around
December, the way things are going at the moment).
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<book> <book>
<bookinfo> <bookinfo>
<bookbiblio>
<title>PPP - Pedantic PPP Primer</title> <title>PPP - Pedantic PPP Primer</title>
<authorgroup> <authorgroup>
<author> <author>
<surname>Maintainer: Steve Sims <emphasis remap=tt><ulink URL="mailto:SimsS@IBM.NET">&lt;SimsS@IBM.NET&gt;</ulink></emphasis></surname> <firstname>Steve</firstname>
<surname>Sims</surname>
<affiliation>
<address><email>SimsS@IBM.net</email></address>
</affiliation>
</author> </author>
</authorgroup> </authorgroup>
@ -17,10 +20,9 @@
a dial-up router/gateway in a Local Area Environment. All entries may a dial-up router/gateway in a Local Area Environment. All entries may
be assumed to be relevant to FreeBSD 2.2+, unless otherwise noted.</para></abstract> be assumed to be relevant to FreeBSD 2.2+, unless otherwise noted.</para></abstract>
</bookbiblio>
</bookinfo> </bookinfo>
<chapter> <preface>
<title>Overview:</title> <title>Overview:</title>
<para>The User-Mode PPP dialer in FreeBSD Version 2.2 (also known as: <para>The User-Mode PPP dialer in FreeBSD Version 2.2 (also known as:
@ -33,10 +35,6 @@ Service Provider. Systems on the LAN can use the FreeBSD system to
forward information between the Internet by means of a single forward information between the Internet by means of a single
dial-connection.</para> dial-connection.</para>
<sect1>
<title>Purpose of this Guide.</title>
<para>This guide explains how to: <para>This guide explains how to:
<itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
@ -61,8 +59,7 @@ to configure and install each individual component; each section stands
alone and may be used to assist in the configuration of various aspects alone and may be used to assist in the configuration of various aspects
of FreeBSD internetworking.</para> of FreeBSD internetworking.</para>
</sect1> </preface>
</chapter>
<chapter> <chapter>
<title>Building the Local Area Network</title> <title>Building the Local Area Network</title>
@ -78,7 +75,7 @@ other Dial-Up service.</para>
<para>This guide assumes a typical Local Area Network lashed together as <para>This guide assumes a typical Local Area Network lashed together as
follows: follows:
<literallayout> <programlisting>
+---------+ ----&gt; Dial-Up Internet Connection +---------+ ----&gt; Dial-Up Internet Connection
| FreeBSD | \ (i.e.: NetCom, AOL, AT&amp;T, EarthLink, | FreeBSD | \ (i.e.: NetCom, AOL, AT&amp;T, EarthLink,
etc) etc)
@ -95,7 +92,7 @@ etc)
| Win95 | | WFW | | WinNT | | Win95 | | WFW | | WinNT |
| "Larry" | | "Moe" | | "Shemp" | | "Larry" | | "Moe" | | "Shemp" |
| | | | | | | | | | | |
+---------+ +---------+ +---------+</literallayout> +---------+ +---------+ +---------+</programlisting>
</para> </para>
</sect1> </sect1>

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<book> <book>
<bookinfo> <bookinfo>
<bookbiblio>
<title>PPP - Pedantic PPP Primer</title> <title>PPP - Pedantic PPP Primer</title>
<authorgroup> <authorgroup>
<author> <author>
<surname>Maintainer: Steve Sims <emphasis remap=tt><ulink URL="mailto:SimsS@IBM.NET">&lt;SimsS@IBM.NET&gt;</ulink></emphasis></surname> <firstname>Steve</firstname>
<surname>Sims</surname>
<affiliation>
<address><email>SimsS@IBM.net</email></address>
</affiliation>
</author> </author>
</authorgroup> </authorgroup>
@ -17,10 +20,9 @@
a dial-up router/gateway in a Local Area Environment. All entries may a dial-up router/gateway in a Local Area Environment. All entries may
be assumed to be relevant to FreeBSD 2.2+, unless otherwise noted.</para></abstract> be assumed to be relevant to FreeBSD 2.2+, unless otherwise noted.</para></abstract>
</bookbiblio>
</bookinfo> </bookinfo>
<chapter> <preface>
<title>Overview:</title> <title>Overview:</title>
<para>The User-Mode PPP dialer in FreeBSD Version 2.2 (also known as: <para>The User-Mode PPP dialer in FreeBSD Version 2.2 (also known as:
@ -33,10 +35,6 @@ Service Provider. Systems on the LAN can use the FreeBSD system to
forward information between the Internet by means of a single forward information between the Internet by means of a single
dial-connection.</para> dial-connection.</para>
<sect1>
<title>Purpose of this Guide.</title>
<para>This guide explains how to: <para>This guide explains how to:
<itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
@ -61,8 +59,7 @@ to configure and install each individual component; each section stands
alone and may be used to assist in the configuration of various aspects alone and may be used to assist in the configuration of various aspects
of FreeBSD internetworking.</para> of FreeBSD internetworking.</para>
</sect1> </preface>
</chapter>
<chapter> <chapter>
<title>Building the Local Area Network</title> <title>Building the Local Area Network</title>
@ -78,7 +75,7 @@ other Dial-Up service.</para>
<para>This guide assumes a typical Local Area Network lashed together as <para>This guide assumes a typical Local Area Network lashed together as
follows: follows:
<literallayout> <programlisting>
+---------+ ----&gt; Dial-Up Internet Connection +---------+ ----&gt; Dial-Up Internet Connection
| FreeBSD | \ (i.e.: NetCom, AOL, AT&amp;T, EarthLink, | FreeBSD | \ (i.e.: NetCom, AOL, AT&amp;T, EarthLink,
etc) etc)
@ -95,7 +92,7 @@ etc)
| Win95 | | WFW | | WinNT | | Win95 | | WFW | | WinNT |
| "Larry" | | "Moe" | | "Shemp" | | "Larry" | | "Moe" | | "Shemp" |
| | | | | | | | | | | |
+---------+ +---------+ +---------+</literallayout> +---------+ +---------+ +---------+</programlisting>
</para> </para>
</sect1> </sect1>