Fix some awkward wording and style problems.

PR:		213061
Reviewed by:	allanjude
Approved by:	allanjude
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Mark Linimon 2016-10-01 13:07:05 +00:00
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<h2>Choosing an Architecture</h2>
<p>Most users of &os; will have hardware for either the amd64,
i386, or armv6 architectures.</p>
<p>Modern PCs use the amd64 architecture, including those with
Intel&reg; branded processors. Computers with more than
3&nbsp;GB of memory should use amd64. If the computer is an
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Bone Black, Panda Board, and Zed Board, use the armv6 SD card
image which supports ARMv6 and ARMv7 processors.</p>
<p>All other users should reference the
<a href="&base;/platforms/index.html">complete list</a>
of supported &os; platforms.</p>
<a name="choose-image"></a>
<h2>Choosing an Image</h2>
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(bootonly) sized ISO
Disc Images, as well as regular and mini USB memory stick
images. Later versions of &os; are also offered as prebuilt
expandable Virtual Machine images, and as SD Cards for embedded
expandable Virtual Machine images, and as SD Card images for embedded
platforms.</p>
<a name="help-statistics"></a>
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<p>If you plan on getting &os; via HTTP or FTP, please check
the listing of <a
href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors-ftp.html"><strong>mirror
sites</strong></a> in the handbook to see if there is a site
sites</strong></a> in the Handbook to see if there is a site
closer to you.</p>
<a name="install"></a>