In MATLAB section: [1]

- Tell the reader he should ask The Mathworks for a native version
- Add more infos about Java support.

In SAP section:
- Add and remove wrong application & command tags
- more s/I/we and contractions removal

PR:		docs/57025 [1]
Submitted by:	Dan Pelleg <daniel+handbook@pelleg.org>

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml

@@ -692,7 +692,9 @@ FEATURE Maple maplelmg 2000.0831 permanent 1 XXXXXXXXXXXX \
     <para>The Linux version of <application>&matlab;</application> can be
       ordered directly from The MathWorks at <ulink
       url="http://www.mathworks.com"></ulink>.  Make sure you also get
-      the license file or instructions how to create it.</para>
+      the license file or instructions how to create it.  While you
+      are there, let them know you would like a native &os;
+      version of their software.</para>
 
     <sect2>
       <title>Installing &matlab;</title>
@@ -811,6 +813,16 @@ exit 0</programlisting>
       </procedure>
     </sect2>
 
+    <sect2>
+      <title>Linking the &java; Runtime Environment</title>
+
+      <para>Change the <application>&java;</application> Runtime
+	Environment (JRE) link to one working under &os;:</para>
+
+      <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd $MATLAB/sys/java/jre/glnx86/</userinput>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>unlink jre; ln -s ./jre1.1.8 ./jre</userinput></screen>
+    </sect2>
+
     <sect2>
       <title>Creating a &matlab; Startup Script</title>
 
@@ -837,10 +849,14 @@ exit 0</programlisting>
       <para>At this point you are ready to type
 	<command>matlab</command> and start using it.  Note that the
 	version of <application>&java;</application> shipped with
-	<application>&matlab;</application> does not work under
+	<application>&matlab;</application> does not work well under
-	&os;.  Therefore you will have to start
+	&os;.  It will make it hard to quit
-	<application>&matlab;</application> with either the
+	<application>&matlab;</application> and you will have to
-	<option>-nojvm</option> or the <option>-nodesktop</option>
+	<command>kill -9</command> it.  If you do not  use
+	<application>&java;</application> at all, you can avoid this
+	nuisance by starting
+	<application>&matlab;</application> with the
+	<option>-nojvm</option>
 	switch.</para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
@@ -880,7 +896,7 @@ exit 0</programlisting>
 	the packages or older versions available in the ports collection.</para>
 
       <para>If you want to run the intelligent agent, you will
-	also need to install the Red Hat <application>Tcl</application> package:
+	also need to install the Red Hat Tcl package:
 	<filename>tcl-8.0.3-20.i386.rpm</filename>.  The general command
 	for installing packages with the official <application>RPM</application> port (<filename role='package'>archivers/rpm</filename>) is:</para>
 
@@ -1631,7 +1647,7 @@ export PATH</programlisting>
 	  tried to install PAM with all the required packages and
 	  finally forced the installation of the PAM package, which
 	  worked. For <application>&sap.r3; 4.6C SR2</application> we
-	  directly forced the installation of the PAM <application>RPM</application>, which also
+	  directly forced the installation of the PAM RPM, which also
 	  works, so it seems the dependent packages are not needed:</para>
 
 
@@ -1639,7 +1655,7 @@ export PATH</programlisting>
 pam-0.68-7.i386.rpm</userinput></screen>
 
 	<para>For <application>&oracle; 8.0.5</application> to run the
-	  intelligent agent, we also had to install the RedHat <application>Tcl</application> package
+	  intelligent agent, we also had to install the RedHat Tcl package
 	  <filename>tcl-8.0.5-30.i386.rpm</filename> (otherwise the
 	  relinking during <application>&oracle;</application> installation
 	  will not work).  There are some other issues regarding
@@ -2419,10 +2435,10 @@ options SEMUME=100       #number of UNDO keys</programlisting>
       <title>Installing &oracle; 8.0.5</title>
 
       <para>Please see the corresponding &sap; Notes and &oracle; Readmes
-        regarding Linux and &oracle; DB for possible problems. Most if
+        regarding Linux and <application>&oracle; DB</application> for possible problems. Most if
         not all problems stem from incompatible libraries.</para>
 
-      <para>For more information on installing &oracle;, refer to <link
+      <para>For more information on installing <application>&oracle;</application>, refer to <link
 	  linkend="linuxemu-oracle">the Installing &oracle;
 	  chapter.</link></para>
 
@@ -2432,7 +2448,7 @@ options SEMUME=100       #number of UNDO keys</programlisting>
 
         <para>If <application>&oracle; 8.0.5</application> is to be
           used, some additional libraries are needed for successfully
-          relinking, as &oracle; 8.0.5 was linked with an old glibc
+          relinking, as <application>&oracle; 8.0.5</application> was linked with an old glibc
           (RedHat 6.0), but RedHat 6.1 already uses a new glibc. So
           you have to install the following additional packages to
           ensure that linking will work:</para>
@@ -2445,9 +2461,9 @@ options SEMUME=100       #number of UNDO keys</programlisting>
 
         <para>See the corresponding &sap; Notes or &oracle; Readmes for
           further information.  If this is no option (at the time of
-          installation I did not have enough time to check this), one
+          installation we did not have enough time to check this), one
           could use the original binaries, or use the relinked
-          binaries from an original RedHat System.</para>
+          binaries from an original RedHat system.</para>
 
         <para>For compiling the intelligent agent, the RedHat Tcl
           package must be installed.  If you cannot get
@@ -2465,19 +2481,19 @@ options SEMUME=100       #number of UNDO keys</programlisting>
 &prompt.root; <userinput>cd /ORACLE_HOME/orainst_sap</userinput>
 &prompt.root; <userinput>./orainst</userinput></screen>
 
-        <para>Confirm all Screens with <keycap>Enter</keycap> until the software is
+        <para>Confirm all screens with <keycap>Enter</keycap> until the software is
           installed, except that one has to deselect the
           <emphasis>&oracle; On-Line Text Viewer</emphasis>, as this is
-          not currently available for Linux. &oracle; then wants to
+          not currently available for Linux. <application>&oracle;</application> then wants to
           relink with <command>i386-glibc20-linux-gcc</command>
           instead of the available <command>gcc</command>,
           <command>egcs</command> or <command>i386-redhat-linux-gcc
           </command>.</para>
 
-        <para>Due to time constrains I decided to use the binaries
+        <para>Due to time constrains we decided to use the binaries
           from an <application>&oracle; 8.0.5 PreProduction</application>
 	  release, after the first
-          attempt at getting the version from the RDBMS-CD working,
+          attempt at getting the version from the RDBMS CD working,
           failed, and finding and accessing the correct RPMs was a
           nightmare at that time.</para>
 
@@ -2489,11 +2505,11 @@ options SEMUME=100       #number of UNDO keys</programlisting>
 
         <para>This installation is quite easy. Mount the CD, start the
           installer.  It will then ask for the location of the &oracle;
-          home directory, and copy all binaries there. I did not
+          home directory, and copy all binaries there. We did not
-          delete the remains of my previous RDBMS-installation tries,
+          delete the remains of our previous RDBMS installation tries,
           though.</para>
 
-        <para>Afterwards, &oracle; Database could be started with no
+        <para>Afterwards, <application>&oracle;</application> Database could be started with no
           problems.</para>
       </sect3>
     </sect2>
@@ -2522,10 +2538,10 @@ options SEMUME=100       #number of UNDO keys</programlisting>
       <sect3 id="databaseload">
         <title>Database Load</title>
 
-        <para>Afterwards, R3SETUP can either be restarted or continued
+        <para>Afterwards, <command>R3SETUP</command> can either be restarted or continued
-          (depending on whether exit was chosen or not). R3SETUP then
+          (depending on whether exit was chosen or not). <command>R3SETUP</command> then
 	  creates the tablespaces and loads the data (for 46B IDES, from 
-	  EXPORT1 to EXPORT6, for 46C from DISK1 to DISK4) with R3load 
+	  EXPORT1 to EXPORT6, for 46C from DISK1 to DISK4) with <command>R3load</command>
 	  into the database.</para>
 
         <para>When the database load is finished (might take a few
@@ -2570,8 +2586,8 @@ options SEMUME=100       #number of UNDO keys</programlisting>
           </tgroup>
         </informaltable>
 
-        <para>At this point I had a few problems with 
+        <para>At this point We had a few problems with 
-	  <literal>dipgntab</literal> during the 4.6B
+	  <command>dipgntab</command> during the 4.6B
 	  installation.</para>
       </sect3>
 
@@ -2593,8 +2609,8 @@ options SEMUME=100       #number of UNDO keys</programlisting>
 	  you have to update the Multi National Language Support tables.
 	  This is described in the &sap; OSS-Notes 15023 and 45619. Otherwise,
 	  you can skip this question during &sap; installation.</para>
-	<note><para>If you don't need MNLS, it is still necessary to check
+	<note><para>If you do not need MNLS, it is still necessary to check
-	  table TCPDB and initializing it if this hasn't been done. See
+	  table TCPDB and initializing it if this has not been done. See
 	  &sap; note 0015023 and 0045619 for further information.</para></note>
       </sect3>
     </sect2>