A couple grammar/style tweaks from koobs
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<p>The Security Team reorganisation, first proposed to Core
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during a meeting at BSDCan this year by Gleb Smirnoff — core
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member and newly-appointed deputy Security Officer — has now
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member and newly-appointed deputy Security Officer (SO) — has now
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been accomplished. In order to improve the project's
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responsiveness to security alerts, to maintain security on
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privileged information received in confidence before general
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security problems, and connecting them with appropriate
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individuals within the project with the technical expertise to
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address the identified concerns. The SO team was cut down to just
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the Security Officer and his deputy, assisted by a secretary, and
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the Security Officer and their deputy, assisted by a secretary, and
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with input and help in drafting security advisories from former
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and any potential future Security Officers plus liasons with Core,
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Cluster Administration and Release Engineering.</p>
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