A couple grammar/style tweaks from koobs

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Benjamin Kaduk 2016-01-17 02:27:55 +00:00
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<p>The Security Team reorganisation, first proposed to Core
during a meeting at BSDCan this year by Gleb Smirnoff &mdash; core
member and newly-appointed deputy Security Officer &mdash; has now
member and newly-appointed deputy Security Officer (SO) &mdash; has now
been accomplished. In order to improve the project's
responsiveness to security alerts, to maintain security on
privileged information received in confidence before general
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security problems, and connecting them with appropriate
individuals within the project with the technical expertise to
address the identified concerns. The SO team was cut down to just
the Security Officer and his deputy, assisted by a secretary, and
the Security Officer and their deputy, assisted by a secretary, and
with input and help in drafting security advisories from former
and any potential future Security Officers plus liasons with Core,
Cluster Administration and Release Engineering.</p>