diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2017-07-2017-09.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2017-07-2017-09.xml
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@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@
Objects that defy categorization.
+Items that defy categorization.
Overall, Zen is now a very usable platform for x86
@@ -236,8 +237,8 @@
This summer has seen the creation of a puppet@ team to help - maintain the ~30 Puppet-related ports in the &os; ports tree. + maintain the approximately 30 Puppet-related ports in the &os; + ports tree. These ports were previously maintained by various committers, - and from time to time this introduced some delays when - updating a port due to the need to wait for a maintainer's + and from time to time the distributed maintainership + introduced some delays when + updating a port due, to the need to wait for a maintainer's approval for a related change to a different port.
Puppet 5 is now in the ports tree (as sysutils/puppet5). The C++ version of Facter (sysutils/facter) got a lot of love and is now a - drop-in replacement for the previous Ruby version of Facter + drop-in replacement for the previous Ruby version (sysutils/rubygem-facter); it is the default facts source for the Puppet 5 port.
@@ -377,7 +380,7 @@iWARP is a protocol suite that enables efficient movement of data across the network, building on Remote Direct Memory Access, Direct Data Placement, and Marker PDU Aligned Framing. - It endeavors to avoid unnecessary (local) data copies and + It endeavors to avoid unnecessary (local) data copies and to offload work from the main CPU to dedicated hardware.
An initial commit adding iWARP support for the Intel X722 @@ -460,10 +463,10 @@
This quarter, with the help of Matt Macy and Sean Bruno (among others), we've submitted a review in Phabricator for the conversion of the ixgbe driver to use the new (and evolving) - iflib interface.
+ iflib framework.Stay tuned for the conversion of the 40G driver - (ixl) as it is currently being ported to use + (ixl), as it is currently being ported to use iflib.
The FreeBSDDesktop team is happy to announce the availability of - graphics/drm-next-kmod. This port for &os; CURRENT + graphics/drm-next-kmod. This port for &os;-CURRENT (amd64) provides support for the amdgpu, i915, and radeon DRM modules using the linuxkpi compatibility framework. - The port currently corresponds to DRM from Linux 4.9 and is in - an experimental state. It works reliably for a lot of testers + The port currently corresponds to the DRM from Linux 4.9 and is in + an experimental state. It works reliably for many testers with modern GPU hardware (AMD HD7000 series/Tahiti to Polaris - and Intel HD3000/Sandy Bridge to Skylake). Broader testing and + and Intel HD3000/Sandy Bridge to Skylake). Broader testing and reporting/fixing of bugs is appreciated.