diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs/article.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs/article.sgml
index e515e83416..9cebeaf440 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs/article.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs/article.sgml
@@ -505,9 +505,8 @@ cvspserver stream tcp nowait root /usr/bin/cvs cvs -f -l -R -T /anoncvstmp --all
             <para>
               Please have look at the <application>CVSup</application> documentation
               like &man.cvsup.1; and consider using the <option>-s</option>
-              option, as it can reduce the amount of work to be done
-              a lot.
-            </para>
+	      option. This reduces I/O operations by assuming the
+	      recorded information about each file is correct.</para> 
           </note>
         </para>
       </sect3>
@@ -515,7 +514,7 @@ cvspserver stream tcp nowait root /usr/bin/cvs cvs -f -l -R -T /anoncvstmp --all
     <sect2 id="mirror-cvs">
       <title>Mirroring the CVS repository</title>
       <para>There are various ways to mirror the CVS repository,
-        <application>CVSup</application> is the most common method</para>
+        <application>CVSup</application> is the most common method.</para>
 
       <sect3 id="mirror-cvs-cvsup">
         <title>Using CVSup</title>