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card is needed.</para>
<para>See also
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<xref linkend="hardware">.</para>
</answer>
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url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/getmsg.cgi?fetch=200565+208320+/usr/local/www/db/text/2001/freebsd-mobile/20010429.freebsd-mobile">This message</ulink>
from Jacques Vidrine to the &a.mobile; describes a procedure
which may work if your newer IBM laptop does not boot FreeBSD
properly, and you can upgrade or downgrade the BIOS..</para>
properly, and you can upgrade or downgrade the BIOS.</para>
<para>If you have an earlier BIOS, and upgrading is not an option a
workaround is to install FreeBSD, change the partition ID FreeBSD
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except for the kernel-configuration program &man.config.8;.
With the exception of the kernel sources, our build structure
is set up so that you can read-only mount the sources from
elsewhere via NFS and still be able to make new binaries.
(Because of the kernel-source restriction, we recommend that
elsewhere via NFS and still be able to make new binaries
(due to the kernel-source restriction, we recommend that
you not mount this on <filename>/usr/src</filename> directly,
but rather in some other location with appropriate symbolic
links to duplicate the top-level structure of the source
tree.)</para>
tree).</para>
<para>Having the sources on-line and knowing how to build a
system with them will make it much easier for you to upgrade