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card is needed.</para> card is needed.</para>
<para>See also <para>See also
<xref linkend="hardware"></para> <xref linkend="hardware">.</para>
</answer> </answer>
</qandaentry> </qandaentry>
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url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/getmsg.cgi?fetch=200565+208320+/usr/local/www/db/text/2001/freebsd-mobile/20010429.freebsd-mobile">This message</ulink> url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/getmsg.cgi?fetch=200565+208320+/usr/local/www/db/text/2001/freebsd-mobile/20010429.freebsd-mobile">This message</ulink>
from Jacques Vidrine to the &a.mobile; describes a procedure from Jacques Vidrine to the &a.mobile; describes a procedure
which may work if your newer IBM laptop does not boot FreeBSD which may work if your newer IBM laptop does not boot FreeBSD
properly, and you can upgrade or downgrade the BIOS..</para> properly, and you can upgrade or downgrade the BIOS.</para>
<para>If you have an earlier BIOS, and upgrading is not an option a <para>If you have an earlier BIOS, and upgrading is not an option a
workaround is to install FreeBSD, change the partition ID FreeBSD workaround is to install FreeBSD, change the partition ID FreeBSD
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except for the kernel-configuration program &man.config.8;. except for the kernel-configuration program &man.config.8;.
With the exception of the kernel sources, our build structure With the exception of the kernel sources, our build structure
is set up so that you can read-only mount the sources from is set up so that you can read-only mount the sources from
elsewhere via NFS and still be able to make new binaries. elsewhere via NFS and still be able to make new binaries
(Because of the kernel-source restriction, we recommend that (due to the kernel-source restriction, we recommend that
you not mount this on <filename>/usr/src</filename> directly, you not mount this on <filename>/usr/src</filename> directly,
but rather in some other location with appropriate symbolic but rather in some other location with appropriate symbolic
links to duplicate the top-level structure of the source links to duplicate the top-level structure of the source
tree.)</para> tree).</para>
<para>Having the sources on-line and knowing how to build a <para>Having the sources on-line and knowing how to build a
system with them will make it much easier for you to upgrade system with them will make it much easier for you to upgrade