Run a few chapters through aspell.

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linkend="makeworld">make world</link> the first time through
as part of the upgrading process. Reading the &a.current;
will keep you up-to-date on other bootstrapping procedures
that sometimes become necessary as we move towards the next
that sometimes become necessary as we move toward the next
release.</para>
</listitem>
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linkend="makeworld">make world</link> the first time through
as part of the upgrading process. Reading the &a.stable; will
keep you up-to-date on other bootstrapping procedures that
sometimes become necessary as we move towards the next
sometimes become necessary as we move toward the next
release.</para>
</listitem>
</orderedlist>
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<para>Sometimes these mistakes can be quite harmless, just causing
your system to print a new diagnostic warning. Or the change may
be catastrophic, and render your system unbootable or destroy your
filesystems (or worse).</para>
file systems (or worse).</para>
<para>If problems like these occur, a <quote>heads up</quote> is
posted to the appropriate mailing list, explaining the nature of
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&prompt.root; <userinput>mount -a -t ufs</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>swapon -a</userinput></screen>
<para>This checks the filesystems, remounts <filename>/</filename>
read/write, mounts all the other UFS filesystems referenced in
<para>This checks the file systems, remounts <filename>/</filename>
read/write, mounts all the other UFS file systems referenced in
<filename>/etc/fstab</filename> and then turns swapping on.</para>
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<filename>/stand</filename> as well. These files consist of hard
links to the <filename>/stand/sysinstall</filename> binary. This
binary should be statically linked, so that it can work when no other
filesystems (and in particular <filename>/usr</filename>) have been
file systems (and in particular <filename>/usr</filename>) have been
mounted.</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/src/release/sysinstall</userinput>
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problems can creep in, causing your build to fail in odd ways.
This frequently generates noise on the &os; mailing lists,
when one person complains that their build has failed, not
realising that it is because they have tried to cut
realizing that it is because they have tried to cut
corners.</para>
</answer>
</qandaentry>
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<listitem>
<para>Put the <filename>/usr/src</filename> and
<filename>/usr/obj</filename> directories on separate
filesystems held on separate disks. If possible, put these
file systems held on separate disks. If possible, put these
disks on separate disk controllers.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Better still, put these filesystems across multiple
<para>Better still, put these file systems across multiple
disks using the &man.ccd.4; (concatenated disk
driver) device.</para>
</listitem>
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machine.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem><para>The filesystem holding
<listitem><para>The file system holding
<filename>/usr/src</filename> can be mounted (or remounted)
with the <option>noatime</option> option. This prevents the
filesystem from recording the file access time. You probably
file system from recording the file access time. You probably
do not need this information anyway.
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mount -u -o noatime /usr/src</userinput></screen>
<warning>
<para>The example assumes <filename>/usr/src</filename> is
on its own filesystem. If it is not (if it is a part of
on its own file system. If it is not (if it is a part of
<filename>/usr</filename> for example) then you will
need to use that filesystem mount point, and not
need to use that file system mount point, and not
<filename>/usr/src</filename>.</para>
</warning>
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>The filesystem holding <filename>/usr/obj</filename> can
<para>The file system holding <filename>/usr/obj</filename> can
be mounted (or remounted) with the <quote>async</quote>
option. This causes disk writes to happen asynchronously.
In other words, the write completes immediately, and the
@ -1668,14 +1668,14 @@ Building everything..
dramatic performance boost.</para>
<warning>
<para>Keep in mind that this option makes your filesystem
<para>Keep in mind that this option makes your file system
more fragile. With this option there is an increased
chance that, should power fail, the filesystem will be in
chance that, should power fail, the file system will be in
an unrecoverable state when the machine restarts.</para>
<para>If <filename>/usr/obj</filename> is the only thing on
this filesystem then it is not a problem. If you have
other, valuable data on the same filesystem then ensure
this file system then it is not a problem. If you have
other, valuable data on the same file system then ensure
your backups are fresh before you enable this
option.</para>
</warning>
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<warning>
<para>As above, if <filename>/usr/obj</filename> is not on
its own filesystem, replace it in the example with the
its own file system, replace it in the example with the
name of the appropriate mount point.</para>
</warning>
</listitem>

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<sect1 id="desktop-summary">
<title>Summary</title>
<para>While FreeBSD is popular amongst ISPs for its performance and
<para>While FreeBSD is popular among ISPs for its performance and
stability, it is quite ready for day-to-day use as a desktop.
With several thousand applications available as
<ulink url="http://www.freebsd.org/where.html">packages</ulink> or

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<para>&man.dump.8; <emphasis>Period.</emphasis> Elizabeth D. Zwicky
torture tested all the backup programs discussed here. The clear
choice for preserving all your data and all the peculiarities of Unix
file systems is <command>dump</command>. Elizabeth created filesystems containing
file systems is <command>dump</command>. Elizabeth created file systems containing
a large variety of unusual conditions (and some not so unusual ones)
and tested each program by doing a backup and restore of those
file systems. The peculiarities included: files with holes, files with

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objectives were set after consulting with the system's current
users and, once it became clear that the project was on the road
to perhaps even becoming a reality, I contacted Walnut Creek CDROM
with an eye towards improving FreeBSD's distribution channels for
with an eye toward improving FreeBSD's distribution channels for
those many unfortunates without easy access to the Internet.
Walnut Creek CDROM not only supported the idea of distributing
FreeBSD on CD but also went so far as to provide the project with a