diff --git a/en/events/events.xml b/en/events/events.xml
index ef1ed5a798..a3c96ba1cc 100644
--- a/en/events/events.xml
+++ b/en/events/events.xml
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 <events>
   <cvs:keywords xmlns:cvs="http://www.FreeBSD.org/XML/CVS" version="1.0">
     <cvs:keyword name="freebsd">
-      $FreeBSD: www/en/events/events.xml,v 1.9 2003/11/06 22:43:02 simon Exp $
+      $FreeBSD: www/en/events/events.xml,v 1.10 2003/11/09 15:07:53 brueffer Exp $
     </cvs:keyword>
   </cvs:keywords>
 
@@ -176,11 +176,11 @@
       <country>Brazil</country>
       <city>Rio de Janeiro</city>
     </location>
-    <description>This is the first BSDCon Brasil edition.  BSDCon
+    <description>This is the first edition of BSDCon Brasil.  BSDCon
       Brasil is being promoted and organized by a pool of corporations
-      connected with BSD community.  There will be two intensive days
+      connected with the BSD community.  There will be two intensive days
       of workshops, presentations and mini-tutorials related to BSD at
-      all.</description>
+      large.</description>
   </event>
 
   <event id="sf10yearparty">