This patch addresses the following:

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- rewording to remove you, etc., i.e., and references to PPP

- fixes xref

- general tightening, removal of redundant paragraphs, and many fixes to grammos/typos

- a reference to a non-existing logging section was removed

- several comments were addressed and removed

Approved by	gjb (mentor)

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