Minor language/grammatical fixups.

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Ceri Davies 2004-06-06 00:37:34 +00:00
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supported by the DVD Forum. A DVD-RAM can be seen as a
removable hard drive. However, this media is not
compatible with most DVD-ROM drives and DVD-Video players;
only few DVD writers will support the DVD-RAM.</para>
only a few DVD writers support the DVD-RAM format.</para>
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4485&nbsp;MB (1 kilobyte is 1024 bytes).</para>
<note>
<para>A difference must be done between the physical media and
the application. For example a DVD-Video is a specific
<para>A distinction must be made between the physical media and
the application. For example, a DVD-Video is a specific
file layout that can be written on any recordable DVD
physical media: DVD-R, DVD+R, DVD-RW etc. Before choosing
the type of media, you just must be sure the burner and the
the type of media, you must be sure that both the burner and the
DVD-Video player (a standalone player or a DVD-ROM drive on
a computer) are compatible with the media.</para></note>
a computer) are compatible with the media under consideration.</para></note>
</sect2>
<sect2>