Improve the main paragraph on the front page of www.FreeBSD.org.
We only have a few sentences so we should use it to describe why FreeBSD is relevant and interesting. Spending half of the paragraph listing 7 trademark symbols and the hardware platforms supported is not at all a compelling introduction to what is great about FreeBSD (to be fair it worked fine when we supported fewer platforms). Point out some of the FreeBSD highlights as succinctly as possible to entice users to click through to more of the second level pages: FreeBSD works on modern server, desktop, and embedded computer platforms, has great networking and security features, is used by some of the busiest web sites and most pervasive embedded devices, has over 30 years of continuous development, etc.. Add links to the platforms page and large users of FreeBSD section of the Handbook. Reviewed by: marketing@ (rwatson, mwlucas, gnn)
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<!ENTITY title "The FreeBSD Project">
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<!-- $FreeBSD$ -->
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<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/index.xsl,v 1.165 2008/12/11 21:11:25 blackend Exp $ -->
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<xsl:stylesheet xmlns:xsl="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Transform" version="1.0">
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<xsl:import href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/XML/www/lang/share/sgml/libcommon.xsl"/>
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<h1>
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Based on BSD &unix;
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</h1>
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<p>
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FreeBSD® is an advanced operating system for
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x86 compatible (including Pentium® and Athlon™),
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amd64 compatible (including Opteron™, Athlon™64, and EM64T),
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UltraSPARC®, IA-64, PC-98 and ARM architectures.
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It is derived from BSD, the version of &unix; developed at the
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University of California, Berkeley.
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It is developed and maintained by a
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<a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/staff-committers.html">large
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team of individuals</a>.
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Additional <a href="&base;/platforms/">platforms</a> are in
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various stages of development.
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</p>
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<div id="TXTFRONTFEATURELINK">
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»<a href="&base;/about.html" title="Learn More">Learn More</a>
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</div> <!-- TXTFRONTFEATURELINK -->
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</div> <!-- FRONTFEATURECONTENT -->
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</div> <!-- FRONTFEATURELEFT -->
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<p>FreeBSD® is an advanced
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operating system for modern server,
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desktop, and embedded computer <a
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href="&base;/platforms/">platforms</a>.
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FreeBSD's code base has undergone
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over thirty years of continuous
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development, improvement, and
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optimization. It is developed and
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maintained by a <a
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href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/staff-committers.html">large
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team of individuals</a>. FreeBSD
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provides advanced networking,
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impressive security features, and
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world class performance and is used
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by some of the world's <a
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href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/nutshell.html#INTRODUCTION-NUTSHELL-USERS">busiest
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web sites</a> and most pervasive
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embedded networking and storage
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devices.</p>
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<div
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id="TXTFRONTFEATURELINK"> »<a
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href="&base;/about.html"
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title="Learn More">Learn More</a>
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</div> <!-- TXTFRONTFEATURELINK -->
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</div> <!-- FRONTFEATURECONTENT -->
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</div> <!-- FRONTFEATURELEFT -->
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<div id="FRONTFEATUREMIDDLE">
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<div class="frontgetroundbox">
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