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Improve the main paragraph on the front page of www.FreeBSD.org.

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We only have a few sentences so we should use it to describe why
FreeBSD is relevant and interesting.  Spending half of the paragraph
listing 7 trademark symbols and the hardware platforms supported is
not at all a compelling introduction to what is great about FreeBSD
(to be fair it worked fine when we supported fewer platforms).

Point out some of the FreeBSD highlights as succinctly as possible to
entice users to click through to more of the second level pages:
FreeBSD works on modern server, desktop, and embedded computer
platforms, has great networking and security features, is used by some
of the busiest web sites and most pervasive embedded devices, has over
30 years of continuous development, etc..

Add links to the platforms page and large users of FreeBSD section of
the Handbook.

Reviewed by:	marketing@ (rwatson, mwlucas, gnn)
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Murray Stokely 2008-12-31 04:00:29 +00:00
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<!ENTITY title "The FreeBSD Project"> <!ENTITY title "The FreeBSD Project">
]> ]>
<!-- $FreeBSD$ --> <!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/index.xsl,v 1.165 2008/12/11 21:11:25 blackend Exp $ -->
<xsl:stylesheet xmlns:xsl="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Transform" version="1.0"> <xsl:stylesheet xmlns:xsl="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Transform" version="1.0">
<xsl:import href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/XML/www/lang/share/sgml/libcommon.xsl"/> <xsl:import href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/XML/www/lang/share/sgml/libcommon.xsl"/>
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<h1> <h1>
Based on BSD &unix; Based on BSD &unix;
</h1> </h1>
<p>
FreeBSD&reg; is an advanced operating system for <p>FreeBSD&reg; is an advanced
x86 compatible (including Pentium&reg; and Athlon&trade;), operating system for modern server,
amd64 compatible (including Opteron&trade;, Athlon&trade;64, and EM64T), desktop, and embedded computer <a
UltraSPARC&reg;, IA-64, PC-98 and ARM architectures. href="&base;/platforms/">platforms</a>.
It is derived from BSD, the version of &unix; developed at the FreeBSD's code base has undergone
University of California, Berkeley. over thirty years of continuous
It is developed and maintained by a development, improvement, and
<a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/staff-committers.html">large optimization. It is developed and
team of individuals</a>. maintained by a <a
Additional <a href="&base;/platforms/">platforms</a> are in href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/staff-committers.html">large
various stages of development. team of individuals</a>. FreeBSD
</p> provides advanced networking,
<div id="TXTFRONTFEATURELINK"> impressive security features, and
&#187;<a href="&base;/about.html" title="Learn More">Learn More</a> world class performance and is used
by some of the world's <a
href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/nutshell.html#INTRODUCTION-NUTSHELL-USERS">busiest
web sites</a> and most pervasive
embedded networking and storage
devices.</p>
<div
id="TXTFRONTFEATURELINK"> &#187;<a
href="&base;/about.html"
title="Learn More">Learn More</a>
</div> <!-- TXTFRONTFEATURELINK --> </div> <!-- TXTFRONTFEATURELINK -->
</div> <!-- FRONTFEATURECONTENT --> </div> <!-- FRONTFEATURECONTENT -->
</div> <!-- FRONTFEATURELEFT --> </div> <!-- FRONTFEATURELEFT -->