A few more wording tweaks to the section on ENs.

- Use "revisions from the stable/ branch" instead of
  "revisions against the stable/ branch".
- Use "the <foo> team".

Reviewed by:	gjb
Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D20902
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John Baldwin 2019-07-09 23:59:30 +00:00
parent 9041bce78e
commit 4ffb0e9d91
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00
svn path=/head/; revision=53242

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<para>The completed Errata Notice template should be emailed
together with either a patch against the &branch.releng;
branch or a list of revisions against the &branch.stable;
branch or a list of revisions from the &branch.stable;
branch.</para>
<para>For Errata Notice requests immediately following the
release, the request should be emailed to both &team.re; and
&team.secteam;. Once the &branch.releng; branch has been
handed over to &team.secteam; as described in <xref
release, the request should be emailed to both the &team.re; and
the &team.secteam;. Once the &branch.releng; branch has been
handed over to the &team.secteam; as described in <xref
linkend="releng-wrapup-handoff"/>, Errata Notice requests
should be sent to &team.secteam;.</para>
should be sent to the &team.secteam;.</para>
</sect2>
<sect2 xml:id="releng-wrapup-handoff">