From 50b039b6b7bfa7a12c44bbd493b49b7cdf6bd86f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Giorgos Keramidas Date: Mon, 11 Feb 2002 22:53:47 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Various grammar fixes taken from the patch submitted in the PR. PR: docs/34547 Submitted by: Jay Edwards --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml | 20 +++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml index e10ef02403..08118720da 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml @@ -228,14 +228,13 @@ - Anyone who has an improvement and/or bug fix is free + Anyone who has an improvement or bug fix is free to submit their code and have it added to the source tree (subject to one or two obvious provisions). - For those of our readers whose first language is not - English, it may be worth pointing out that the word + It is worth pointing out that the word free is being used in two ways here, one meaning at no cost, the other meaning you can do whatever you like. Apart from one or two things you @@ -257,16 +256,15 @@ released in &rel.current.date;. This is also the latest STABLE version. - Briefly explained, -STABLE is aimed - at the ISP or other corporate user who wants stability and a + Briefly, -STABLE is aimed + at the ISP, corporate user, or any user who wants stability and a low change count over the wizzy new features of the latest -CURRENT snapshot. Releases can come - from either branch, but you should only use - -CURRENT if you are sure that you are - prepared for its increased volatility (relative to + from either branch, but -CURRENT + should only be used if you are prepared for its increased volatility (relative to -STABLE, that is). - Releases are only made every + Releases are made every few months. While many people stay more up-to-date with the FreeBSD sources (see the questions on FreeBSD-CURRENT and glitches. Questions such as make world produces some error about - groups on the -CURRENT mailing list are sometimes + groups on the -CURRENT mailing list may be treated with contempt. Every day, To give people who would like to run -CURRENT or - -STABLE but who do not have the time and/or bandwidth to + -STABLE but who do not have the time or bandwidth to follow it on a day-to-day basis an easy way of bootstrapping it onto their systems.