From 565294db09c452d671aa7838ec9fec0ff61c1081 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sun, 14 Apr 2002 02:13:42 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] FTP section cleanup. - Reword descriptions of FTP servers. -
 Capitalize list entries.

PR:		docs/37037
Submitted by:	Dominic Marks <dominic_marks@btinternet.com>
---
 en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs/article.sgml | 30 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs/article.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs/article.sgml
index db30227eb6..51ebc50185 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs/article.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hubs/article.sgml
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
           FTP distributions. FTP access must be
           anonymous, and no upload/download ratios
           are allowed (a ridicilous thing anyway).
-          Upload capability is not required (and should
+          Upload capability is not required (and <emphasis>must</emphasis>
           never be allowed for the FreeBSD file space).
           Also the FreeBSD archive should be available under
           the path <filename>/pub/FreeBSD</filename>.
@@ -144,36 +144,36 @@
           can be set up to allow anonymous FTP
           (in alphabetical order).
           <itemizedlist>
-            <listitem><para><command>/usr/libexec/ftpd</command>: FreeBSD's own ftpd,
-              will probably do a very good job. Be sure to read &man.ftpd.8;.</para>
+            <listitem><para><filename>/usr/libexec/ftpd</filename>: FreeBSD's own <application>ftpd</application>,
+              can be used. Be sure to read &man.ftpd.8;.</para>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
-              <para><filename role="package">ftp/ncftpd</filename>: a commercial package, free for 
-              educational institutions.</para>
+              <para><filename role="package">ftp/ncftpd</filename>: A commercial package, free for
+                educational use.</para>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
               <para><filename role="package">ftp/oftpd</filename>: an ftpd designed with
               security as a main focus.</para>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
-              <para><filename role="package">ftp/proftpd</filename>: a modular and very flexible ftpd.</para>
+              <para><filename role="package">ftp/proftpd</filename>: A modular and very flexible ftpd.</para>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
-              <para><filename role="package">ftp/pure-ftpd</filename>: another ftpd developed with
+              <para><filename role="package">ftp/pure-ftpd</filename>: Another ftpd developed with
                 security in mind.</para>
             </listitem>
-            <listitem><para><filename role="package">ftp/twoftpd</filename>: same as above</para></listitem>
-            <listitem><para><filename role="package">ftp/vsftpd</filename>: the <quote>very secure</quote> ftpd</para></listitem>
+            <listitem><para><filename role="package">ftp/twoftpd</filename>: As above.</para></listitem>
+            <listitem><para><filename role="package">ftp/vsftpd</filename>: The <quote>very secure</quote> ftpd.</para></listitem>
             <listitem>
-              <para><filename role="package">ftp/wu-ftpd</filename>: The widely used ftpd from Washington
-              University. It became sort of infamous, because of the huge
-              amount of security issues that became obvious in wu-ftpd.
-              It also around for a long time, which can be positive 
-              (experience) or negative (lots of bloated code).</para>
+              <para><filename role="package">ftp/wu-ftpd</filename>: The ftpd from Washington
+              University. It has become infamous, because of the huge
+              amount of security issues that have been found in it.
+              If you do choose to use this software be sure to
+              keep it up to date.</para>
             </listitem>
           </itemizedlist>
           FreeBSD's ftpd, proftpd, wu-ftpd and maybe ncftpd are among the
-          most used ones. The others are probably not that much widespread.
+          most commonly ones. The others do not have a large userbase among mirror sites.
         </para>
       </sect3>
       <sect3 id="mirror-serv-rsync">