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PR:		77148
Submitted by:	Siebrand Mazeland <s.mazeland@xs4all.nl>
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Tom Rhodes 2005-02-08 19:43:56 +00:00
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files by setting certain objects as classified?</para>
<para>In the file system case, access to objects might be
considered confidential to some users but not to others.
considered confidential to some users, but not to others.
For an example, a large development team might be broken
off into smaller groups of individuals. Developers in
project A might not be permitted to access objects written
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with a value of <quote>low</quote>.</para>
<para>A few policies which support the labeling feature in
&os; offers three specific predefined labels. These
&os; offer three specific predefined labels. These
are the low, high, and equal labels. Although they enforce
access control in a different manner with each policy, you
can be sure that the low label will be the lowest setting,
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used on objects. This will enforce one set of
access permissions across the entire system and in many
environments may be all that is required. There are a few
cases; however, where multiple labels may be set on objects
cases where multiple labels may be set on objects
or subjects in the file system. For those cases, the
<option>multilabel</option> option may be passed to
&man.tunefs.8;.</para>
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configures the policy so that users are placed in the
appropriate categories/access levels. Alas, many policies can
restrict the <username>root</username> user as well. Basic
control over objects will then be released to the group but
control over objects will then be released to the group, but
<username>root</username> may revoke or modify the settings
at any time. This is the hierarchal/clearance model covered
by policies such as Biba and <acronym>MLS</acronym>.</para>
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<listitem>
<para>The <literal>biba/high</literal> label will permit
writing to objects set at a lower label but not
writing to objects set at a lower label, but not
permit reading that object. It is recommended that this
label be placed on objects that affect the integrity of
the entire system.</para>
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<para>The <acronym>MAC</acronym> version of the Low-watermark
integrity policy, not to be confused with the older &man.lomac.4;
implementation, works almost identically to Biba but with the
implementation, works almost identically to Biba, but with the
exception of using floating labels to support subject
demotion via an auxiliary grade compartment. This secondary
compartment takes the form of <literal>[auxgrade]</literal>.